GMAT考试写作参考例文（4）
<p> <span word="GMAT">GMAT</span>考试写作参考例文</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="memorandum">memorandum</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="vice">vice</span> <span word="president">president</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Nostrum">Nostrum</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="pharmaceutical">pharmaceutical</span> <span word="corporation">corporation</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="proposal">proposal</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="retirement">retirement</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="receive">receive</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="implemented">implemented</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="time">time</span>. <span word="An">An</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="financially">financially</span> <span word="unjustified">unjustified</span>, <span word="since">since</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="preceding">preceding</span> <span word="year">year</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="unnecessary">unnecessary</span>, <span word="since">since</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="chief">chief</span> <span word="competitor">competitor</span>, <span word="Panacea">Panacea</span>, <span word="offers">offers</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="retirement">retirement</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="currently">currently</span> <span word="offer">offer</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="assume">assume</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="reasonably">reasonably</span> <span word="satisfied">satisfied</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="retirement">retirement</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="indicated">indicated</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="two">two</span>-<span word="thirds">thirds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="respondents">respondents</span> <span word="viewed">viewed</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="favorably">favorably</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="vice">vice</span> <span word="president">president</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Nostrum">Nostrum</span> <span word="argues">argues</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="implementing">implementing</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="retirement">retirement</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="idea">idea</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="time">time</span>. <span word="His">His</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="line">line</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="financially">financially</span> <span word="unjustified">unjustified</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="unnecessaryfinancially">unnecessaryfinancially</span> <span word="unjustified">unjustified</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="preceding">preceding</span> <span word="years">years</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="unnecessary">unnecessary</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="Nostrums">Nostrums</span> <span word="chief">chief</span> <span word="competitor">competitor</span> <span word="offers">offers</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="Nostrum">Nostrum</span> <span word="employee">employee</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="indicates">indicates</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="two">two</span>-<span word="thirds">thirds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="respondents">respondents</span> <span word="viewed">viewed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="current">current</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="package">package</span> <span word="favorably">favorably</span>. <span word="While">While</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="merit">merit</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="completely">completely</span> <span word="convincing">convincing</span>.</p>
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