GMAT写作满分速成 背模板三重境界(二)
<p> 1. 开头段</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="sending">sending</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mechanics">mechanics</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="GAA">GAA</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="two">two</span>-<span word="week">week</span> <span word="QCS">QCS</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="proper">proper</span> <span word="maintenance">maintenance</span> <span word="procedures">procedures</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="automatically">automatically</span> <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="improved">improved</span> <span word="maintenance">maintenance</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="greater">greater</span> <span word="customer">customer</span> <span word="satisfaction">satisfaction</span> <span word="along">along</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="greater">greater</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="airline">airline</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span> <span word="points">points</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="performance">performance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="maintenance">maintenance</span> <span word="crews">crews</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span> <span word="racing">racing</span> <span word="industry">industry</span> <span word="improved">improved</span> <span word="markedly">markedly</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="crews">crews</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="attended">attended</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="seminar">seminar</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="maintenance">maintenance</span> <span word="crews">crews</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span> <span word="racing">racing</span> <span word="industry">industry</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mechanics">mechanics</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="GAA">GAA</span> <span word="perform">perform</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="functions">functions</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="airlines">airlines</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="gain">gain</span> <span word="similar">similar</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="program">program</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="suffers">suffers</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="critical">critical</span> <span word="fallacies">fallacies</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span> <span word="recommends">recommends</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="C">C</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="advise">advise</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="install">install</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="conditioners">conditioners</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="fans">fans</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="cooling">cooling</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="electricity">electricity</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="justify">justify</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="claim">claim</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span> <span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="C">C</span> <span word="suffer">suffer</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rising">rising</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="electricity">electricity</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="cites">cites</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="using">using</span> <span word="fans">fans</span> <span word="alone">alone</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="using">using</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="conditioners">conditioners</span> <span word="alone">alone</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="using">using</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="fans">fans</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="conditioners">conditioners</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="either">either</span> <span word="using">using</span> <span word="fans">fans</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="conditioners">conditioners</span> <span word="alone">alone</span>. <span word="A">A</span> <span word="careful">careful</span> <span word="examination">examination</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="reveal">reveal</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="groundless">groundless</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="is">is</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="analysis">analysis</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span> <span word="claims">claims</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="P">P</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="employment">employment</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="spouse">spouse</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="faculty">faculty</span> <span word="member">member</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="hire">hire</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="substantiate">substantiate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span> <span word="cites">cites</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="example">example</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="B">B</span> <span word="College">College</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="professors">professors</span> <span word="prefer">prefer</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="spouse">spouse</span> <span word="employed">employed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="geographical">geographical</span> <span word="area">area</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="spouse">spouse</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="campus">campus</span>, <span word="no">no</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="accepted">accepted</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="factor">factor</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="professors">professors</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="deciding">deciding</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="accept">accept</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="position">position</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unconvincing">unconvincing</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="critical">critical</span> <span word="flaws">flaws</span>.</p>
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