GMAT写作满分速成 背模板三重境界(三)
<p> 2. 中间段</p><p> <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="false">false</span> <span word="analogy">analogy</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span> <span word="simply">simply</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="airplane">airplane</span> <span word="mechanics">mechanics</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span> <span word="maintenance">maintenance</span> <span word="crews">crews</span> <span word="perform">perform</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="similar">similar</span> <span word="functions">functions</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="functions">functions</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="indeed">indeed</span> <span word="comparable">comparable</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="know">know</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="structure">structure</span>, <span word="operation">operation</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="function">function</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="airplanes">airplanes</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="automobiles">automobiles</span> <span word="differ">differ</span> <span word="conspicuously">conspicuously</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="airplane">airplane</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="refueling">refueling</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="engine">engine</span> <span word="maintenance">maintenance</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="here">here</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="exist">exist</span> <span word="fundamental">fundamental</span> <span word="differences">differences</span>: <span word="the">the</span> <span word="structure">structure</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="building">building</span> <span word="materials">materials</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="engines">engines</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="different">different</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="oil">oil</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="use">use</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="even">even</span> <span word="though">though</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="two">two</span>-<span word="week">week</span> <span word="Quality">Quality</span>-<span word="Care">Care</span> <span word="Seminar">Seminar</span> <span word="proved">proved</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="improving">improving</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="performance">performance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="maintenance">maintenance</span> <span word="crews">crews</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span> <span word="racing">racing</span> <span word="industry">industry</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="guarantee">guarantee</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="airplane">airplane</span> <span word="mechanics">mechanics</span>.</p><p> <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span> <span word="commits">commits</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="fallacy">fallacy</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="hasty">hasty</span> <span word="generalization">generalization</span>. <span word="Even">Even</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="maintenance">maintenance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="airline">airline</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="improved">improved</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="sending">sending</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="mechanics">mechanics</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Seminar">Seminar</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span>, <span word="of">of</span> <span word="course">course</span> , <span word="unwarranted">unwarranted</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="follow">follow</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="greater">greater</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="greater">greater</span> <span word="customer">customer</span> <span word="satisfaction">satisfaction</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="airline">airline</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="know">know</span>, <span word="customer">customer</span> <span word="satisfaction">satisfaction</span> <span word="depends">depends</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="maintenance">maintenance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="airplane">airplane</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="instance">instance</span>, <span word="customers">customers</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="generally">generally</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="punctuality">punctuality</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="on">on</span>-<span word="board">board</span> <span word="service">service</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ticket">ticket</span> <span word="price">price</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="luggage">luggage</span> <span word="handling">handling</span> <span word="procedure">procedure</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="discount">discount</span>, <span word="all">all</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="ignored">ignored</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span>. <span word="Besides">Besides</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="solid">solid</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="concerning">concerning</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="airplane">airplane</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="profits">profits</span>. <span word="Unless">Unless</span> <span word="Get">Get</span>-<span word="Away">Away</span> <span word="Airlines">Airlines</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="significantly">significantly</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="customers">customers</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="passengers">passengers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="cut">cut</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="costs">costs</span>, <span word="both">both</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="unknown">unknown</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="guarantee">guarantee</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="inevitably">inevitably</span> <span word="harvest">harvest</span> <span word="greater">greater</span> <span word="profits">profits</span>. <span word="Actually">Actually</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arguers">arguers</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="investing">investing</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="program">program</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="customer">customer</span> <span word="satisfaction">satisfaction</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="probably">probably</span> <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="ineffective">ineffective</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="misleading">misleading</span>.</p>
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