GMAT写作范文精选：Argument例文(11)
<p> <span word="GMAT">GMAT</span>写作范文精选：<span word="Argument">Argument</span>例文</p><p> 小编提醒：考生们可在日常生活中多读范文，多练笔，培养出好的语感和逻辑，这样才能在考试中写出优秀的作文。</p><p> 11. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="editorial">editorial</span> <span word="section">section</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="four">four</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Montoya">Montoya</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="served">served</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="mayor">mayor</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="San">San</span> <span word="Perdito">Perdito</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="decreased">decreased</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="unemployment">unemployment</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="increased">increased</span>. <span word="Two">Two</span> <span word="businesses">businesses</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="closed">closed</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="opened">opened</span>. <span word="Under">Under</span> <span word="Varro">Varro</span>, <span word="who">who</span> <span word="served">served</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="mayor">mayor</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="four">four</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="Montoya">Montoya</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="unemployment">unemployment</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="decreased">decreased</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="increased">increased</span>. <span word="Clearly">Clearly</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="residents">residents</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="San">San</span> <span word="Perdito">Perdito</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="served">served</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="voted">voted</span> <span word="Montoya">Montoya</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="office">office</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="reelected">reelected</span> <span word="Varro">Varro</span>. <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span> <span word="endorsed">endorsed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="residents">residents</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="San">San</span> <span word="Perdito">Perdito</span> <span word="vote">vote</span> <span word="current">current</span> <span word="mayor">mayor</span> <span word="Montoya">Montoya</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="office">office</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="re">re</span>-<span word="elect">elect</span> <span word="former">former</span> <span word="mayor">mayor</span> <span word="Varro">Varro</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="cited">cited</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="Montoyas">Montoyas</span> <span word="four">four</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="office">office</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="decreased">decreased</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="unemployment">unemployment</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="increased">increased</span>, <span word="whereas">whereas</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="Varros">Varros</span> <span word="term">term</span> <span word="unemployment">unemployment</span> <span word="declined">declined</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="grew">grew</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="involves">involves</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sort">sort</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="gross">gross</span> <span word="oversimplification">oversimplification</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="emotional">emotional</span> <span word="appeal">appeal</span> <span word="typical">typical</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="political">political</span> <span word="rhetoric">rhetoric</span>; <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unconvincing">unconvincing</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Montoya">Montoya</span> <span word="administration">administration</span> <span word="caused">caused</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="unemployment">unemployment</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="San">San</span> <span word="Perdito">Perdito</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="loss">loss</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="line">line</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="Montoya">Montoya</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="elected">elected</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rise">rise</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="unemployment">unemployment</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="decline">decline</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="population">population</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="former">former</span> <span word="event">event</span> <span word="caused">caused</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="latter">latter</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="fallacious">fallacious</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="unless">unless</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="causal">causal</span> <span word="explanations">explanations</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="considered">considered</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="ruled">ruled</span> <span word="out">out</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="perhaps">perhaps</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="statewide">statewide</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="nationwide">nationwide</span> <span word="recession">recession</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="events">events</span>. <span word="Or">Or</span> <span word="perhaps">perhaps</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="current">current</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="downturn">downturn</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="larger">larger</span> <span word="picture">picture</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="cycles">cycles</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="trends">trends</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="nothing">nothing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="happens">happens</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="mayor">mayor</span>. <span word="Yet">Yet</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="possibility">possibility</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Varro">Varro</span> <span word="enjoyed">enjoyed</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="period">period</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="stability">stability</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Varros">Varros</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="administration">administration</span> <span word="set">set</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="stage">stage</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="unemployment">unemployment</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="decline">decline</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="experiencing">experiencing</span> <span word="under">under</span> <span word="Montoya">Montoya</span>.</p>
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