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<p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="memorandum">memorandum</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="directors">directors</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="security">security</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="safety">safety</span> <span word="consulting">consulting</span> <span word="service">service</span>.</p><p> <span word="Our">Our</span> <span word="research">research</span> <span word="indicates">indicates</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="six">six</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="incidents">incidents</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="employee">employee</span> <span word="theft">theft</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="reported">reported</span> <span word="within">within</span> <span word="ten">ten</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="clients">clients</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="analyzing">analyzing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="security">security</span> <span word="practices">practices</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="ten">ten</span> <span word="companies">companies</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="learned">learned</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="requires">requires</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="wear">wear</span> <span word="photo">photo</span> <span word="identification">identification</span> <span word="badges">badges</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="work">work</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="future">future</span>, <span word="therefore">therefore</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="recommend">recommend</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="identification">identification</span> <span word="badges">badges</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="clients">clients</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="directors">directors</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="security">security</span>-<span word="and">and</span> <span word="safety">safety</span>-<span word="consulting">consulting</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="conclude">conclude</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="photo">photo</span> <span word="identification">identification</span> <span word="badges">badges</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="recommended">recommended</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="clients">clients</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="prevent">prevent</span> <span word="employee">employee</span> <span word="theft">theft</span>. <span word="Their">Their</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="revealing">revealing</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="ten">ten</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="previous">previous</span> <span word="clients">clients</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="photo">photo</span> <span word="identification">identification</span> <span word="badges">badges</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="incidents">incidents</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="employee">employee</span> <span word="theft">theft</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="six">six</span>-<span word="year">year</span> <span word="period">period</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="directors">directors</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="problematic">problematic</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="respects">respects</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="directors">directors</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="employee">employee</span> <span word="theft">theft</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ten">ten</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="wear">wear</span> <span word="photo">photo</span> <span word="identification">identification</span> <span word="badges">badges</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="revealed">revealed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="research">research</span> <span word="establishes">establishes</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="positive">positive</span> <span word="correlation">correlation</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="theft">theft</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="requirement">requirement</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="wear">wear</span> <span word="badges">badges</span>; <span word="it">it</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="establish">establish</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="causal">causal</span> <span word="connection">connection</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="Other">Other</span> <span word="factors">factors</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="surveillance">surveillance</span> <span word="cameras">cameras</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="spot">spot</span> <span word="checks">checks</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="briefcases">briefcases</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="purses">purses</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="responsible">responsible</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="employee">employee</span> <span word="theft">theft</span> <span word="within">within</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ten">ten</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="analyzed">analyzed</span>.</p>
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