GMAT Argument写作范文89篇（11）
<p> <span word="On">On</span> <span word="average">average</span>, <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="devote">devote</span> 39% <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="retail">retail</span> <span word="expenditure">expenditure</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="store">store</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="services">services</span>, <span word="while">while</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="average">average</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="only">only</span> 25%. <span word="Since">Since</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="dramatically">dramatically</span> <span word="within">within</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="decade">decade</span>, <span word="department">department</span> <span word="stores">stores</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="expect">expect</span> <span word="retail">retail</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="significantly">significantly</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="period">period</span>. <span word="Furthermore">Furthermore</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="advantage">advantage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="trend">trend</span>, <span word="these">these</span> <span word="stores">stores</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="replace">replace</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="intended">intended</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attract">attract</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="consumer">consumer</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="intended">intended</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attract">attract</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="consumer">consumer</span>.</p><p> <span word="Sample">Sample</span> <span word="Essay">Essay</span> 3:</p><p> <span word="Based">Based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="expected">expected</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="decade">decade</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="predicts">predicts</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="retail">retail</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="stores">stores</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="significantly">significantly</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="ten">ten</span> <span word="years">years</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="bolster">bolster</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="prediction">prediction</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="cites">cites</span> <span word="statistics">statistics</span> <span word="showing">showing</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="devote">devote</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="percentage">percentage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="retail">retail</span> <span word="expenditure">expenditure</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="department">department</span>-<span word="store">store</span> <span word="services">services</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="do">do</span>.</p><p> <span word="Since">Since</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rise">rise</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="department">department</span>-<span word="store">store</span> <span word="goods">goods</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="services">services</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="recommends">recommends</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="stores">stores</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="adjust">adjust</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="inventories">inventories</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="capitalize">capitalize</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="trend">trend</span>. <span word="Specifically">Specifically</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="recommended">recommended</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="stores">stores</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="inventory">inventory</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="aimed">aimed</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="decrease">decrease</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="inventory">inventory</span>, <span word="of">of</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="aimed">aimed</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="problematic">problematic</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>.</p>
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