备考资料：GMAT优秀作文精选（216）
<p> 为了方便广大考生更好的复习，综合整理了备考资料：<span word="GMAT">GMAT</span>优秀作文精选，以供各位考生考试复习参考,希望对考生复习有所帮助。</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="editorial">editorial</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="rebukes">rebukes</span> <span word="Oak">Oak</span> <span word="City">City</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="allowing">allowing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="construction">construction</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="downtown">downtown</span> <span word="shopping">shopping</span> <span word="mall">mall</span>. <span word="Citing">Citing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="occurred">occurred</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="building">building</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mail">mail</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="residents">residents</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Oak">Oak</span> <span word="City">City</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="benefited">benefited</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mail">mail</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Oak">Oak</span> <span word="City">City</span> <span word="exercised">exercised</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="judgment">judgment</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="allowing">allowing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mail">mail</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="built">built</span>. <span word="Among">Among</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="cited">cited</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="closure">closure</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="businesses">businesses</span>, <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="parking">parking</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="downtown">downtown</span> <span word="area">area</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="trash">trash</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="litter">litter</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="park">park</span> <span word="near">near</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mall">mall</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="argues">argues</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="derived">derived</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="benefiting">benefiting</span> <span word="Oak">Oak</span> <span word="City">City</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="owner">owner</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mall">mall</span> <span word="lives">lives</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="city">city</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="problematic">problematic</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="respects">respects</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="addition">addition</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="mall">mall</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="various">various</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="cited">cited</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="offered">offered</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="construction">construction</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mall">mall</span> <span word="occurred">occurred</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="manifested">manifested</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="insufficient">insufficient</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="establish">establish</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="question">question</span>. <span word="A">A</span> <span word="chronological">chronological</span> <span word="relationship">relationship</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="indicators">indicators</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="causal">causal</span> <span word="relationship">relationship</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="events">events</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="focused">focused</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="negative">negative</span> <span word="effects">effects</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="malt">malt</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="city">city</span>. <span word="A">A</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="detailed">detailed</span> <span word="analysis">analysis</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="situation">situation</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="reveal">reveal</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="positive">positive</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="outweigh">outweigh</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="focuses">focuses</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="new">new</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="created">created</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="residents">residents</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Oak">Oak</span> <span word="City">City</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="tax">tax</span> <span word="revenues">revenues</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="city">city</span>. <span word="Lacking">Lacking</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="comprehensive">comprehensive</span> <span word="analysis">analysis</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="impact">impact</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mail">mail</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="Oak">Oak</span> <span word="City">City</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="presumptuous">presumptuous</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="conclude">conclude</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Oak">Oak</span> <span word="Citys">Citys</span> <span word="decision">decision</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="allow">allow</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mall">mall</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="built">built</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="incorrect">incorrect</span>.</p>
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