备考资料：GMAT优秀作文精选（170）
<p> 为了方便广大考生更好的复习，综合整理了备考资料：<span word="GMAT">GMAT</span>优秀作文精选，以供各位考生考试复习参考,希望对考生复习有所帮助。</p><p> <span word="Sample">Sample</span> <span word="Essay">Essay</span> 2:</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="retailers">retailers</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="replace">replace</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="intended">intended</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attract">attract</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="intended">intended</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attract">attract</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="entirely">entirely</span> <span word="logically">logically</span> <span word="convincing">convincing</span>, <span word="since">since</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="ignores">ignores</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="crucial">crucial</span> <span word="assumptions">assumptions</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="omits">omits</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="volumes">volumes</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="volume">volume</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> 39% <span word="is">is</span> <span word="smaller">smaller</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> 25%, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="retail">retail</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="decade">decade</span>.</p><p> <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="even">even</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="volumes">volumes</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="decade">decade</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="decade">decade</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="retailexpenditure">retailexpenditure</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="retail">retail</span> <span word="trade">trade</span> <span word="depends">depends</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="circumstances">circumstances</span>, <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="consuming">consuming</span> <span word="desire">desire</span>.</p><p> <span word="Finally">Finally</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="within">within</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="decade">decade</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="consumer">consumer</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="goods">goods</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="services">services</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="stores">stores</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="retailers">retailers</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="ignore">ignore</span> <span word="them">them</span>.</p><p> <span word="Thus">Thus</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="completely">completely</span> <span word="sound">sound</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="growing">growing</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="within">within</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="decade">decade</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="prove">prove</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span>-<span word="that">that</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="stores">stores</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="replace">replace</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attract">attract</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span>-<span word="since">since</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="address">address</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="assumptions">assumptions</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="already">already</span> <span word="raised">raised</span>. <span word="Ultimately">Ultimately</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="strengthened">strengthened</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="making">making</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="clear">clear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="volumes">volumes</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="types">types</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="comparable">comparable</span>, <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="type">type</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="correlated">correlated</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="retail">retail</span> <span word="sales">sales</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="growth">growth</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span>.</p>
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