GRE写作范文：teamwork
<p> <span word="People">People</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="productively">productively</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="teams">teams</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="individually">individually</span>. <span word="Teamwork">Teamwork</span> <span word="requires">requires</span> <span word="cooperation">cooperation</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="motivates">motivates</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="competition">competition</span> <span word="does">does</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="asserts">asserts</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="teamwork">teamwork</span> <span word="requires">requires</span> <span word="cooperative">cooperative</span> <span word="effort">effort</span>, <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="motivated">motivated</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="therefore">therefore</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="productive">productive</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="teams">teams</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="individually">individually</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="competitors">competitors</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="assertion">assertion</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="cases">cases</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="examines">examines</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="world">world</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="becomes">becomes</span> <span word="clear">clear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="approach">approach</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="motivating">motivating</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="achieving">achieving</span> <span word="productivity">productivity</span> <span word="depends">depends</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="specific">specific</span> <span word="job">job</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="productivity">productivity</span> <span word="dearly">dearly</span> <span word="depends">depends</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="coworkers">coworkers</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="cooperate">cooperate</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="members">members</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="team">team</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="businesses">businesses</span> <span word="involved">involved</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="production">production</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="complex">complex</span> <span word="processes">processes</span>, <span word="all">all</span> <span word="departments">departments</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="divisions">divisions</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="lock">lock</span>-<span word="step">step</span> <span word="fashion">fashion</span> <span word="toward">toward</span> <span word="product">product</span> <span word="roll">roll</span>-<span word="out">out</span>. <span word="Cooperative">Cooperative</span> <span word="interaction">interaction</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="essential">essential</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="performed">performed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="relative">relative</span> <span word="isolation">isolation</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="technical">technical</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="ability">ability</span>, <span word="not">not</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="others">others</span>, <span word="would">would</span> <span word="seem">seem</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="important">important</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="scientists">scientists</span>, <span word="researchers">researchers</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="programmers">programmers</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="collaborate">collaborate</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="establish">establish</span> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="goals">goals</span>, <span word="coordinate">coordinate</span> <span word="efforts">efforts</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="lines">lines</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="kinds">kinds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="attracted">attracted</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="motivated">motivated</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="purpose">purpose</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="ambition">ambition</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="types">types</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="competition">competition</span>, <span word="tenacity">tenacity</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="ambition">ambition</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="keys">keys</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="productivity">productivity</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="commissioned">commissioned</span> <span word="salespersons">salespersons</span> <span word="compensation">compensation</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="sometimes">sometimes</span> <span word="tenure">tenure</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="potential">potential</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="promotion">promotion</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="comparative">comparative</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="performance">performance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="coworkers">coworkers</span>. <span word="Working">Working</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="competitors">competitors</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="firms">firms</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="salespeople">salespeople</span> <span word="maximize">maximize</span> <span word="productivity">productivity</span>-<span word="in">in</span> <span word="terms">terms</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="profit">profit</span>--<span word="both">both</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="finn">finn</span>. <span word="Key">Key</span> <span word="leadership">leadership</span> <span word="positions">positions</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="call">call</span>, <span word="above">above</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="tenacity">tenacity</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="competitive">competitive</span> <span word="spirit">spirit</span>. <span word="A">A</span> <span word="finns">finns</span> <span word="founding">founding</span> <span word="entrepreneur">entrepreneur</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="maintain">maintain</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="spirit">spirit</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="firm">firm</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="survive">survive</span>, <span word="let">let</span> <span word="alone">alone</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="maximize">maximize</span> <span word="productivity">productivity</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="observation">observation</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="kinds">kinds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="inclined">inclined</span> <span word="toward">toward</span> <span word="entrepreneurship">entrepreneurship</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="competitive">competitive</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="nature">nature</span>, <span word="not">not</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="motivated">motivated</span> <span word="primarily">primarily</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="purpose">purpose</span>.</p>
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