GRE写作高分句型
<p> 一篇优秀的<span word="GRE">GRE</span>范文，一定是由多个精彩的句型组合而成的，因此要想突破<span word="GRE">GRE</span>作文首先要从句型下手。</p><p> <span word="Six">Six</span> <span word="months">months</span> <span word="ago">ago</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="region">region</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Forestville">Forestville</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speed">speed</span> <span word="limit">limit</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="vehicles">vehicles</span> <span word="traveling">traveling</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="regions">regions</span> <span word="highways">highways</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="ten">ten</span> <span word="miles">miles</span> <span word="per">per</span> <span word="hour">hour</span>.</p><p> <span word="Since">Since</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="effect">effect</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="region">region</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="by">by</span> 15 <span word="percent">percent</span>.</p><p> <span word="But">But</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speed">speed</span> <span word="limit">limit</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Elmsford">Elmsford</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="region">region</span> <span word="neighboring">neighboring</span> <span word="Forestville">Forestville</span>, <span word="remained">remained</span> <span word="unchanged">unchanged</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="declined">declined</span> <span word="slightly">slightly</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="six">six</span>-<span word="month">month</span> <span word="period">period</span>.</p><p> <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Forestville">Forestville</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="regions">regions</span> <span word="highways">highways</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="campaign">campaign</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="Forestvilles">Forestvilles</span> <span word="speed">speed</span> <span word="limit">limit</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increase">increase</span>.</p><p> 原题逻辑顺序：6月前<span word="F">F</span>提高限速==〉<span word="F">F</span>事故升高==〉<span word="E">E</span>没提高限速反而事故略减少==〉<span word="F">F</span>要想减少事故就不能提高限速。</p><p> 6分：</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="agrument">agrument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="well">well</span>-<span word="presented">presented</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="thoroughly">thoroughly</span> <span word="well">well</span>-<span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>. 这一句话指出原文存在逻辑问题，这里用的语言很简单。而不是北美范文中有时堆彻了一堆放之四海皆为准的无关痛痒的话。很明显，官方的意思是说这样的客套话一定要说，但是一定要用最简洁的形式来说，而同时那些具体问题具体分析性的语言则要详细的说明白，说清楚。 <span word="By">By</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="comparison">comparison</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="region">region</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Forestville">Forestville</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="town">town</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="speed">speed</span> <span word="limit">limit</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="therefore">therefore</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span>, <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="region">region</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Elmsford">Elmsford</span>, <span word="an">an</span> <span word="area">area</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="speed">speed</span> <span word="limit">limit</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="subsequently">subsequently</span> <span word="fewer">fewer</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="reducing">reducing</span> <span word="Forestvilles">Forestvilles</span> <span word="speed">speed</span> <span word="limits">limits</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="decrease">decrease</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="logical">logical</span>.这个开头真的非常巧，因为他用一句话达到了两句话的效果，即同时复述题目并指出问题在哪，而没有像北美一样说结论是什么证据是什么证据再说不能支持结论。设想一下如果我们是考官的话看到这样的一个开头得到了一个什么信息呢：此考生已经完全读懂题目了，并且他对原文的逻辑顺序也已经掌握了。深一点层次来说：<span word="aw">aw</span>考试考得是我们的分析能力，这是重点。虽然官方说明也曾经强调理解原文很重要，但是终归理解能力并不是考试的重点。所以比较好的做法是：分析题目的脉络，写出分析性的概括。这里没有必要单独再复述题目了因为在分析中已经暗含了原文的信息。这里还有一点值得注意：为什么要在第二句话的最前面用<span word="comparison">comparison</span>这个词呢，这是有讲究的!原文的论证核心就是比较，而这里将此词提到最前面一是说这是原文的逻辑关联，二是暗示我下面要做的就是围绕着此比较而进行的。有点类似于主题句的主干提前。这个词真的是令人发指的重要，看到后面你就知道了。</p>
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