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<p> <span word="Unfortunately">Unfortunately</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="media">media</span> <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="highlight">highlight</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="sensational">sensational</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="moment">moment</span>. <span word="Society">Society</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="served">served</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="media">media</span> <span word="reported">reported</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="focused">focused</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="fully">fully</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="events">events</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="trends">trends</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="ultimately">ultimately</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="long">long</span>- <span word="term">term</span> <span word="significance">significance</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="asserts">asserts</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="merely">merely</span> <span word="highlighting">highlighting</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="sensational">sensational</span> <span word="events">events</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="media">media</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="complete">complete</span> <span word="coverage">coverage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="events">events</span>. <span word="While">While</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speakers">speakers</span> <span word="assertion">assertion</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="merit">merit</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="normative">normative</span> <span word="standpoint">standpoint</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="final">final</span> <span word="analysis">analysis</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="assertion">assertion</span> <span word="indefensible">indefensible</span>.</p><p> 个人认为这一段最后一句可以背掉放入自己建立的句子库内。</p><p> 运用了让步的手法，先是分析原作为何出此观点的原因，然后再驳斥，提出自己的正确观点。我们要特别留意第一句的架构，虽然过分复杂，但是好像<span word="ets">ets</span>就是喜欢这种变态句子。</p><p> <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="medias">medias</span> <span word="current">current</span> <span word="trend">trend</span> <span word="toward">toward</span> <span word="highlights">highlights</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sensational">sensational</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="justifiable">justifiable</span>. <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="increasingly">increasingly</span> <span word="eventful">eventful</span> <span word="place">place</span>; <span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="passing">passing</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="becomes">becomes</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="onerous">onerous</span> <span word="task">task</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="media">media</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attempt">attempt</span> <span word="full">full</span> <span word="news">news</span> <span word="coverage">coverage</span>. <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="increasingly">increasingly</span> <span word="busy">busy</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="average">average</span> <span word="U">U</span>.<span word="S">S</span>. <span word="worker">worker</span> <span word="spends">spends</span> <span word="nearly">nearly</span> 60 <span word="hours">hours</span> <span word="per">per</span> <span word="week">week</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="now">now</span>; <span word="and">and</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="families">families</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="spouses">spouses</span> <span word="work">work</span>.</p><p> 从现实需要和事实证明两方面来驳斥原文观点，这一手法不妨借鉴。必须补充的是，运用的<span word="First">First</span>,<span word="second">second</span>这样的分层次分析使得结构鲜明，表意清晰也是值得学习的。</p>
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