怎么用GRE写作范文
<p> 新<span word="GRE">GRE</span>高分写作亮点点评，希望可以给大家一些写作思考。</p><p> <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="luxuries">luxuries</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="conveniences">conveniences</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="contemporary">contemporary</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="entirely">entirely</span> <span word="harmless">harmless</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="fact">fact</span>, <span word="prevent">prevent</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="developingsintostruly">developingsintostruly</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="independent">independent</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span>.</p><p> <span word="Do">Do</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="luxuries">luxuries</span> <span word="serve">serve</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="undermine">undermine</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="strength">strength</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="independence">independence</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span>? <span word="The">The</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="believes">believes</span> <span word="so">so</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="agree">agree</span>. <span word="Consider">Consider</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="example">example</span>. <span word="Most">Most</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="necessity">necessity</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="luxury">luxury</span>; <span word="yet">yet</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="aptly">aptly</span> <span word="supports">supports</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speakers">speakers</span> <span word="point">point</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="depend">depend</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="cars">cars</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="crutches">crutches</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="prevent">prevent</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="truly">truly</span> <span word="independent">independent</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="character">character</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span>.</p><p> 可借鉴之处：开头启用了一个非常醒目的问句，这是最能吸引批卷者视线也是高分作文的表现!</p><p> <span word="Consider">Consider</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="effect">effect</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="independence">independence</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="respects">respects</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span> <span word="serves">serves</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enhance">enhance</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="independence">independence</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="cars">cars</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="isolated">isolated</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="depressed">depressed</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="transportation">transportation</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="independent">independent</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="pursuing">pursuing</span> <span word="gainful">gainful</span> <span word="employment">employment</span> <span word="outside">outside</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="communities">communities</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="teenagers">teenagers</span> <span word="discover">discover</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="owning">owning</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="car">car</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="borrowing">borrowing</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="occasion">occasion</span>, <span word="affords">affords</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="needed">needed</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="independence">independence</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>.</p><p> 此段主要是为下一段的驳论作铺垫。</p>
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