GRE范文鉴赏（2）
<p> <span word="Essay">Essay</span> <span word="Response">Response</span><span word="Score">Score</span> 4</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="actuality">actuality</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="probable">probable</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="bodies">bodies</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="surely">surely</span> <span word="deteriorate">deteriorate</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="minds">minds</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="significant">significant</span> <span word="amount">amount</span>. <span word="Who">Who</span> <span word="cant">cant</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="lazier">lazier</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="thats">thats</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="key">key</span> <span word="word">word</span>, <span word="lazy">lazy</span>, <span word="not">not</span> <span word="stupid">stupid</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="incorporate">incorporate</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="lives">lives</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="day">day</span>, <span word="possibly">possibly</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="before">before</span>. <span word="Our">Our</span> <span word="abilities">abilities</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="think">think</span>, <span word="learn">learn</span>, <span word="philosophize">philosophize</span>, <span word="etc">etc</span>. <span word="may">may</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="reach">reach</span> <span word="limits">limits</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="dreamed">dreamed</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="average">average</span> <span word="people">people</span>. <span word="Using">Using</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="solve">solve</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="continue">continue</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="realize">realize</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="potential">potential</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="race">race</span>.</p><p> <span word="If">If</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="it">it</span>, <span word="using">using</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="solve">solve</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="complicating">complicating</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="gives">gives</span> <span word="humans">humans</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="chance">chance</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="expand">expand</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="thinking">thinking</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="learning">learning</span>, <span word="opening">opening</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="worlds">worlds</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="people">people</span>. <span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="glad">glad</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="chance">chance</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="expand">expand</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="horizons">horizons</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="learning">learning</span> <span word="more">more</span>, <span word="going">going</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="places">places</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="trying">trying</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="things">things</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="wasnt">wasnt</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="invention">invention</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="technological">technological</span> <span word="devices">devices</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="wouldnt">wouldnt</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="sitting">sitting</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="trying">trying</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="philosophize">philosophize</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="technology">technology</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="extremely">extremely</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="poorer">poorer</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="invention">invention</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="internet">internet</span>. <span word="Think">Think</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="impact">impact</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="printing">printing</span> <span word="press">press</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="technologically">technologically</span> <span word="superior">superior</span> <span word="mackine">mackine</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="had">had</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="race">race</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="think">think</span>.</p><p> <span word="Right">Right</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="seeing">seeing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="golden">golden</span> <span word="age">age</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="technology">technology</span>, <span word="using">using</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="lives">lives</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="theres">theres</span> <span word="instant">instant</span> <span word="coffee">coffee</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="microwave">microwave</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="ready">ready</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="day">day</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="arent">arent</span> <span word="allowing">allowing</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="minds">minds</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="deteriorate">deteriorate</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="using">using</span> <span word="them">them</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="making">making</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="easier">easier</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="ourselves">ourselves</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="saving">saving</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="days">days</span>. <span word="Going">Going</span> <span word="off">off</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="cars">cars</span> <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="horse">horse</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="buggy">buggy</span>. <span word="Think">Think</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="brain">brain</span> <span word="power">power</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="genius">genius</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="single">single</span> <span word="invention">invention</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="changed">changed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="move">move</span> <span word="across">across</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="globe">globe</span>.</p>
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