GRE范文鉴赏(1)
<p> <span word="Essay">Essay</span> <span word="Response">Response</span><span word="Score">Score</span> 3</p><p> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="current">current</span> <span word="proof">proof</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="advancing">advancing</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="deteriorate">deteriorate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="humans">humans</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="think">think</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="contrary">contrary</span>, <span word="advancements">advancements</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="advanced">advanced</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="vast">vast</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="fields">fields</span>, <span word="opening">opening</span> <span word="opportunities">opportunities</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="understanding">understanding</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="achievement">achievement</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="dibilitating">dibilitating</span> <span word="illnesses">illnesses</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="diseases">diseases</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="alzheimers">alzheimers</span> <span word="disease">disease</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="slowing">slowing</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="solved">solved</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="technological">technological</span> <span word="advancements">advancements</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="stem">stem</span> <span word="cell">cell</span> <span word="research">research</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="future">future</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="growing">growing</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="brain">brain</span> <span word="cells">cells</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="possibility">possibility</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reverse">reverse</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="onset">onset</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="alzheimers">alzheimers</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="reality">reality</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="initiative">initiative</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="humans">humans</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="demonstrates">demonstrates</span> <span word="greater">greater</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="humans">humans</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="think">think</span>.</p><p> <span word="One">One</span> <span word="aspect">aspect</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="humans">humans</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="initially">initially</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="seen">seen</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="example">example</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="deteriorating">deteriorating</span> <span word="minds">minds</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="internet">internet</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="cell">cell</span> <span word="phones">phones</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="humans">humans</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="seek">seek</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="enviroments">enviroments</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="aspects">aspects</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="Now">Now</span> <span word="humans">humans</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="sit">sit</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="chair">chair</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="type">type</span> <span word="anything">anything</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="answer">answer</span>. <span word="Our">Our</span> <span word="reliance">reliance</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="type">type</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="detrimental">detrimental</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="regulated">regulated</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="regularily">regularily</span> <span word="substituted">substituted</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="sources">sources</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="interactions">interactions</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="hands">hands</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="learning">learning</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="humans">humans</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="reliance">reliance</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="technology">technology</span>, <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="species">species</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="advance">advance</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="utilizing">utilizing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="sources">sources</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="outside">outside</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="computer">computer</span>. <span word="Supplementing">Supplementing</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="internet">internet</span> <span word="access">access</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="surely">surely</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="solve">solve</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="continually">continually</span> <span word="advancing">advancing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="race">race</span>.</p>
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