GRE Issue 官方范文(一)
<p> 编辑点评： <span word="ETS">ETS</span>是美国教育考试服务中心的简称，本文是<span word="ETS">ETS</span>公布的<span word="Issue">Issue</span>主题的范文，大家需要多多研读4-6分的作文，分析它们获得高分的原因，学习到有用的逻辑思维、框架内容和词句等。</p><p> 美国教育考试服务中心公布的<span word="Issue">Issue</span>主题的范文中，包含了不同的分数，大家需要仔细研读的是 4-6 分作文，对于一些低分作文，大家可以看看官方对它们的评价，分析其分数低的原因。</p><p> <span word="test">test</span>1</p><p> <span word="Both">Both</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="technological">technological</span> <span word="tools">tools</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="uses">uses</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="humanity">humanity</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="created">created</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="civilizations">civilizations</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="loneliness">loneliness</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span>.</p><p> 6</p><p> <span word="Technology">Technology</span>, <span word="broadly">broadly</span> <span word="defined">defined</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="tools">tools</span>, <span word="has">has</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="history">history</span>.</p><p> <span word="Ever">Ever</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="Erg">Erg</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="caveman">caveman</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="conked">conked</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="animal">animal</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="rock">rock</span>, <span word="people">people</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="using">using</span> <span word="technology">technology</span>.</p><p> <span word="For">For</span> <span word="thousands">thousands</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="years">years</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="tools">tools</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="move">move</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="closer">closer</span> <span word="together">together</span>.</p><p> <span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="fields">fields</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="cultivated">cultivated</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="store">store</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="existed">existed</span>, <span word="people">people</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="cities">cities</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="small">small</span> <span word="nomadic">nomadic</span> <span word="tribes">tribes</span>.</p><p> <span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="lately">lately</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="Erg">Erg</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="descendants">descendants</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="question">question</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="technology">technology</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="Industrial">Industrial</span> <span word="Revolution">Revolution</span> <span word="introduced">introduced</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="spread">spread</span> <span word="technologies">technologies</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="mechanized">mechanized</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="tasks">tasks</span>.</p><p> <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="drive">drive</span> <span word="toward">toward</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="efficient">efficient</span> <span word="production">production</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="distribution">distribution</span> , <span word="people">people</span> <span word="began">began</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="act">act</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="cogs">cogs</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="technological">technological</span> <span word="machine">machine</span>.</p>
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