GRE作文范文分析
<p> 编辑点评： 大家备考<span word="GRE">GRE</span>作文时，不妨看看优秀的范文，从中吸取一些遣词造句和文章结构方面的优点，融会贯通，变成自己的东西。</p><p> <span word="Such">Such</span> <span word="nonmainstream">nonmainstream</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="inquiry">inquiry</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="astrology">astrology</span>， <span word="fortune">fortune</span>-<span word="telling">telling</span>， <span word="and">and</span> <span word="psychic">psychic</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="paranormal">paranormal</span> <span word="pursuits">pursuits</span> <span word="play">play</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="vital">vital</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="satisfying">satisfying</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="addressed">addressed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="mainstream">mainstream</span> <span word="science">science</span>.</p><p> 这个题目是讲主流和非主流的关系，提的方面是科学领域内。但是这个题目里面我自认为的一个问题是，<span word="speaker">speaker</span>把<span word="astrology">astrology</span>，<span word="fortune">fortune</span>-<span word="telling">telling</span>，<span word="psychic">psychic</span>，和<span word="paranormal">paranormal</span> <span word="pursuits">pursuits</span>也归结为科学的范畴内了，但这些都是我们通常成为的伪科学的几个典型方面。</p><p> 这个题目，目前我没有想到什么好的方面来支持这个<span word="speaker">speaker</span>的正确性。希望有持支持观点的朋友来说说你自己的看法伪科学的相关释义附在点评最后处</p><p> <span word="This">This</span> <span word="statement">statement</span> <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="consists">consists</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="claims">claims</span>: <span word="that">that</span> <span word="non">non</span>-<span word="mainstream">mainstream</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="inquiry">inquiry</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="vital">vital</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="satisfying">satisfying</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="needs">needs</span>， <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="therefore">therefore</span> <span word="vital">vital</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="concede">concede</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="astrology">astrology</span>， <span word="fortune">fortune</span>- <span word="telling">telling</span>， <span word="and">and</span> <span word="psychic">psychic</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="paranormal">paranormal</span> <span word="pursuits">pursuits</span> <span word="respond">respond</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="basic">basic</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="needs">needs</span>.</p><p> 干净利索的分析了题目，但是个人认为还不是分析的很透彻。</p><p> <span word="However">However</span>， <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="potential">potential</span> <span word="harm">harm</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="inflict">inflict</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="participants">participants</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="outweighs">outweighs</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="psychological">psychological</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span>.</p>
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