GRE写词句分析
<p> 编辑点评： 本文总结<span word="GRE">GRE</span>写作遣词造句经常出现的问题，希望童鞋们以此作为参考，在自己的文章中避免出现类似问题。</p><p> 本文总结<span word="GRE">GRE</span> 写作遣词造句经常出现的问题，希望童鞋们以此作为参考，在自己的文章中避免出现类似问题。</p><p> 1、避免使用反问句、设问句。特别是作者也没有答案的问题。</p><p> 例如：<span word="What">What</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="objective">objective</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="information">information</span>? <span word="Is">Is</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="confused">confused</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="astray">astray</span>? <span word="I">I</span> <span word="partly">partly</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="contention">contention</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="enormous">enormous</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="otiose">otiose</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="sometimes">sometimes</span> <span word="render">render</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="lose">lose</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="fail">fail</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="question">question</span> <span word="penetratingly">penetratingly</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="originally">originally</span>.</p><p> 在作文的开头就扔出两个问题，然后接下来的陈述却与问题基本毫无干系。作为读者，首先要考虑那两个问题的答案到底是什么，然后才能往下读。这些在中文里可能会被评作 引人入胜 的好词好句，在英语的论文写作里面，可以说是最大的败笔之一。如果你一定要问问题的话，那就改成陈述句式，例如：<span word="Whether">Whether</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="wrong">wrong</span>? 可以改成：<span word="It">It</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="controversial">controversial</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="that">that</span>.....</p><p> 2、避免集中使用 <span word="Be">Be</span> 动词，包括<span word="is">is</span>, <span word="are">are</span>, <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span>, <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span>, <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> 即使<span word="GRE">GRE</span>考题<span word="statement">statement</span>里面有很多 <span word="Be">Be</span> 动词，你也要避免照抄，因为<span word="statement">statement</span>是浅显地告诉你一个<span word="idea">idea</span>，而不是向你展示<span word="writing">writing</span>.</p>
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