出国考试GRE作文范文（六）
<p> 编辑点评： 大家在备考<span word="GRE">GRE</span>作文时，不妨多多借鉴一下优秀范文中的结构框架、遣词造句等好的地方，将这些好的元素吸收到自己的文章中来，一定会为文章增色不少。</p><p> <span word="Former">Former</span> <span word="Mayor">Mayor</span> <span word="Durant">Durant</span> <span word="owes">owes</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="apology">apology</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Atticus">Atticus</span>. <span word="Both">Both</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="damage">damage</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="River">River</span> <span word="Bridge">Bridge</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="connects">connects</span> <span word="Atticus">Atticus</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Hartley">Hartley</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="experienced">experienced</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bridge">bridge</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="caused">caused</span> 20 <span word="years">years</span> <span word="ago">ago</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="Durant">Durant</span>. <span word="After">After</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="approved">approved</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="construction">construction</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bridge">bridge</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="approved">approved</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wider">wider</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="better">better</span>-<span word="designed">designed</span> <span word="bridge">bridge</span>, <span word="on">on</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="approximately">approximately</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="spent">spent</span>, <span word="none">none</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="damage">damage</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="occurred">occurred</span>. <span word="Instead">Instead</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="River">River</span> <span word="Bridge">Bridge</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="deteriorated">deteriorated</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="rapidly">rapidly</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> 20 <span word="years">years</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="longer">longer</span> <span word="Derby">Derby</span> <span word="Bridge">Bridge</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="river">river</span>. <span word="Even">Even</span> <span word="though">though</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="winters">winters</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="severe">severe</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="years">years</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="excuse">excuse</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="negligence">negligence</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="wastefulness">wastefulness</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Durant">Durant</span>.</p><p> <span word="Sample">Sample</span> <span word="Essay">Essay</span></p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="former">former</span> <span word="Mayor">Mayor</span> <span word="Durant">Durant</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="apologize">apologize</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Atticus">Atticus</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="fault">fault</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="damage">damage</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="occurred">occurred</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="twenty">twenty</span>-<span word="year">year</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="span">span</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="River">River</span> <span word="Bridge">Bridge</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="blames">blames</span> <span word="Mayor">Mayor</span> <span word="Durant">Durant</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="long">long</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bridge">bridge</span>, <span word="stating">stating</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Durant">Durant</span> <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="caused">caused</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="twenty">twenty</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="approved">approved</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="construction">construction</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bridge">bridge</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="approve">approve</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wider">wider</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="better">better</span>-<span word="designed">designed</span> <span word="bridge">bridge</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="vendetta">vendetta</span> <span word="against">against</span> <span word="Mayor">Mayor</span> <span word="Durant">Durant</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="elements">elements</span> <span word="stated">stated</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="accusation">accusation</span>.</p>
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