GRE argument 提纲(二)
<p> 编辑点评： 有时候，提纲的好坏可以决定最终文章质量的优劣，这里为大家推荐几篇不错的<span word="argument">argument</span>类型的提纲，大家可以学习下提纲中归纳论点和论据的方法，非常地具有逻辑性。</p><p> 6.<span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="written">written</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="application">application</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="small">small</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="loan">loan</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="group">group</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="developers">developers</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Monroe">Monroe</span>.</p><p> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="jazz">jazz</span> <span word="music">music</span> <span word="club">club</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Monroe">Monroe</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="tremendously">tremendously</span> <span word="profitable">profitable</span> <span word="enterprise">enterprise</span>. <span word="Currently">Currently</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="nearest">nearest</span> <span word="jazz">jazz</span> <span word="club">club</span> <span word="is">is</span> 65 <span word="miles">miles</span> <span word="away">away</span>; <span word="thus">thus</span>, <span word="our">our</span> <span word="proposed">proposed</span> <span word="club">club</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="C">C</span> <span word="Note">Note</span>, <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="market">market</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="itself">itself</span>. <span word="Plus">Plus</span>, <span word="jazz">jazz</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="extremely">extremely</span> <span word="popular">popular</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Monroe">Monroe</span>: <span word="over">over</span> 100,000 <span word="people">people</span> <span word="attended">attended</span> <span word="Monroe">Monroe</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="jazz">jazz</span> <span word="festival">festival</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="summer">summer</span>, <span word="several">several</span> <span word="well">well</span>-<span word="known">known</span> <span word="jazz">jazz</span> <span word="musicians">musicians</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Monroe">Monroe</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="highest">highest</span>-<span word="rated">rated</span> <span word="radio">radio</span> <span word="program">program</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Monroe">Monroe</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="Jazz">Jazz</span> <span word="Nightly">Nightly</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="airs">airs</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="weeknight">weeknight</span>. <span word="Finally">Finally</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="nationwide">nationwide</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="indicates">indicates</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="typical">typical</span> <span word="jazz">jazz</span> <span word="fan">fan</span> <span word="spends">spends</span> <span word="close">close</span> <span word="to">to</span> $1,000 <span word="per">per</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="jazz">jazz</span> <span word="entertainment">entertainment</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="clear">clear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="C">C</span> <span word="Note">Note</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="money">money</span>.</p><p> <span word="A">A</span>、首先，该全国范围的调查样本选取是否足够随机，如果不随机，则调查结果就不能够得出人均花费$1,000在爵士音乐娱乐上的结论。</p><p> <span word="B">B</span>、即使该调查足够随机，那也是全国范围的调查结论，对于<span word="M">M</span>地区并不一定成立。<span word="M">M</span>地区的居民花费在爵士音乐娱乐上的钱不足$1,000。正如作者所说，<span word="M">M</span>地区的居民喜欢 <span word="Jazz">Jazz</span> <span word="Nightly">Nightly</span> 的广播节目，因此该地区的居民可能更喜欢收听免费的广播，而不是去俱乐部等地方进行消费。</p>
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