GRE考试Issue写作范文详解(9)
<p> 编辑点评： 研习<span word="GRE">GRE</span>作文考试的优秀范文不仅可以学到有用的词汇和句子，更能从中学习逻辑的构建方式和作文框架的结构等内容，本文是<span word="GRE">GRE</span>作文考试<span word="Issue">Issue</span>类型的范文，希望对同学们的备考有所帮助。</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="editorial">editorial</span> <span word="section">section</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="fitness">fitness</span> <span word="magazine">magazine</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="effects">effects</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="longevity">longevity</span>, <span word="medical">medical</span> <span word="researchers">researchers</span> <span word="tracked">tracked</span> 500 <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="men">men</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="a">a</span> 20-<span word="year">year</span> <span word="period">period</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="subjects">subjects</span> <span word="represented">represented</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="variety">variety</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="occupations">occupations</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="parts">parts</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="responded">responded</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="annual">annual</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="asked">asked</span>: <span word="How">How</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="strenuously">strenuously</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span>? <span word="Of">Of</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="responded">responded</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="men">men</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="reported">reported</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="engaged">engaged</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="vigorous">vigorous</span> <span word="outdoor">outdoor</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span> <span word="nearly">nearly</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="lived">lived</span> <span word="longer">longer</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="men">men</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="reported">reported</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="exercised">exercised</span> <span word="mildly">mildly</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="once">once</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="twice">twice</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="week">week</span>. <span word="Given">Given</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="clear">clear</span> <span word="link">link</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="establishes">establishes</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="longevity">longevity</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span>, <span word="doctors">doctors</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="recommend">recommend</span> <span word="moderate">moderate</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="patients">patients</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="encourage">encourage</span> <span word="vigorous">vigorous</span> <span word="outdoor">outdoor</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="basis">basis</span>.</p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="natural">natural</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="assume">assume</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="positive">positive</span> <span word="effect">effect</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="length">length</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="men">men</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="medical">medical</span> <span word="literature">literature</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="published">published</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="showing">showing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="positive">positive</span> <span word="correlation">correlation</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="longevity">longevity</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="particular">particular</span> <span word="argument">argument</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="writer">writer</span> <span word="puts">puts</span> <span word="forth">forth</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="purporting">purporting</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="track">track</span> <span word="five">five</span> <span word="hundred">hundred</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="men">men</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="occupations">occupations</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="parts">parts</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="country">country</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="apparently">apparently</span> <span word="conducted">conducted</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="basis">basis</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="annual">annual</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="asking">asking</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="strenuously">strenuously</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="men">men</span> <span word="exercised">exercised</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="writer">writer</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="clear">clear</span> <span word="link">link</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="longevity">longevity</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="doctors">doctors</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="recommend">recommend</span> <span word="moderate">moderate</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span>, <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="vigorous">vigorous</span> <span word="outdoor">outdoor</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="basis">basis</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="patients">patients</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="writer">writer</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="fails">fails</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="convince">convince</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="due">due</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="lapses">lapses</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="logical">logical</span> <span word="thinking">thinking</span>.</p>
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