GRE作文范文修改:global university
<p> 编辑点评： <span word="GRE">GRE</span>作文是同学们的难点之一，大家平时写好作文以后不妨对自己的作文进行修改，不仅可以巩固思路还能检查出自己作文的问题。本文是一篇修改过的作文，供大家参考。</p><p> <span word="TOPIC">TOPIC</span>: <span word="ISSUE">ISSUE</span>11 - <span word="All">All</span> <span word="nations">nations</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="global">global</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="designed">designed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="engage">engage</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="process">process</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="solving">solving</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="persistent">persistent</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>.</p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="attempting">attempting</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="nice">nice</span> <span word="prospect">prospect</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="describes">describes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="us">us</span>: <span word="scholars">scholars</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="nations">nations</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="global">global</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="cooperate">cooperate</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="solve">solve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="persistent">persistent</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="under">under</span> <span word="current">current</span> <span word="international">international</span> <span word="environment">environment</span>, <span word="that">that</span> <span word="dream">dream</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="hardly">hardly</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="realized">realized</span>. <span word="Before">Before</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="fulfill">fulfill</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="goal">goal</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="numerous">numerous</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>.</p><p> <span word="Admittedly">Admittedly</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="potential">potential</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="hazards">hazards</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="environment">environment</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="poverty">poverty</span> <span word="gap">gap</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="ubiquitous">ubiquitous</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="areas">areas</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="solving">solving</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="beyond">beyond</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="competence">competence</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="achivements">achivements</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="International">International</span> <span word="Committee">Committee</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Red">Red</span> <span word="Cross">Cross</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="International">International</span> <span word="Environment">Environment</span> <span word="Protection">Protection</span> <span word="Orgnization">Orgnization</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="substaintiated">substaintiated</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="effectiveness">effectiveness</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="international">international</span> <span word="cooperation">cooperation</span>. <span word="Thus">Thus</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="considerable">considerable</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="establish">establish</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="globle">globle</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="free">free</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="intervenor">intervenor</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="university">university</span>, <span word="students">students</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="exchange">exchange</span> <span word="ideas">ideas</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="comprehensive">comprehensive</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="issues">issues</span>. <span word="Integrating">Integrating</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="techniques">techniques</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="conceive">conceive</span> <span word="original">original</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="methods">methods</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="solve">solve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="persistent">persistent</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>.</p>
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