GRE考试Issue写作范文详解(19)
<p> 编辑点评： 研习<span word="GRE">GRE</span>作文考试的优秀范文不仅可以学到有用的词汇和句子，更能从中学习逻辑的构建方式和作文框架的结构等内容，本文是<span word="GRE">GRE</span>作文考试<span word="Issue">Issue</span>类型的范文，希望对同学们的备考有所帮助。</p><p> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="continent">continent</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="North">North</span> <span word="America">America</span> <span word="suffer">suffer</span> 9 <span word="times">times</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="chronic">chronic</span> <span word="fatigue">fatigue</span> <span word="and">and</span> 31 <span word="times">times</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="chronic">chronic</span> <span word="depression">depression</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="continent">continent</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Asia">Asia</span>. <span word="Interestingly">Interestingly</span>, <span word="Asians">Asians</span>, <span word="on">on</span> <span word="average">average</span>, <span word="eat">eat</span> 20 <span word="grams">grams</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="soy">soy</span> <span word="per">per</span> <span word="day">day</span>, <span word="whereas">whereas</span> <span word="North">North</span> <span word="Americans">Americans</span> <span word="eat">eat</span> <span word="virtually">virtually</span> <span word="none">none</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="turns">turns</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="soy">soy</span> <span word="contains">contains</span> <span word="phytochemicals">phytochemicals</span> <span word="called">called</span> <span word="isoflavones">isoflavones</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="possess">possess</span> <span word="disease">disease</span>-<span word="preventing">preventing</span> <span word="properties">properties</span>. <span word="Thus">Thus</span>, <span word="North">North</span> <span word="Americans">Americans</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="eating">eating</span> <span word="soy">soy</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="regular">regular</span> <span word="basis">basis</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="preventing">preventing</span> <span word="fatigue">fatigue</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="depression">depression</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span> <span word="cites">cites</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="showing">showing</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="North">North</span> <span word="Americans">Americans</span> <span word="suffer">suffer</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="amazingly">amazingly</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="chronic">chronic</span> <span word="fatigue">fatigue</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="chronic">chronic</span> <span word="depression">depression</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Asia">Asia</span>. <span word="From">From</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="unknown">unknown</span> <span word="source">source</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span> <span word="states">states</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Asians">Asians</span> <span word="eat">eat</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="soy">soy</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="North">North</span> <span word="Americans">Americans</span>, <span word="who">who</span> <span word="eat">eat</span> <span word="almost">almost</span> <span word="none">none</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="soy">soy</span> <span word="contains">contains</span> <span word="disease">disease</span>-<span word="preventing">preventing</span> <span word="properties">properties</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="stating">stating</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="North">North</span> <span word="Americans">Americans</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="regularly">regularly</span> <span word="eating">eating</span> <span word="soy">soy</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="battling">battling</span> <span word="fatigue">fatigue</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="depression">depression</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="suffers">suffers</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> <span word="four">four</span> <span word="critical">critical</span> <span word="fallacies">fallacies</span>.</p><p> <span word="For">For</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sake">sake</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="assume">assume</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="studies">studies</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="statistics">statistics</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="North">North</span> <span word="Americans">Americans</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Asians">Asians</span> <span word="soy">soy</span> <span word="eating">eating</span> <span word="habits">habits</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="correct">correct</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="isoflavones">isoflavones</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="disease">disease</span>-<span word="fighting">fighting</span> <span word="properties">properties</span>. <span word="Given">Given</span> <span word="that">that</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span> <span word="directly">directly</span> <span word="correlating">correlating</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="eating">eating</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="soy">soy</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="prevention">prevention</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="disease">disease</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="depression">depression</span>. <span word="First">First</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="simply">simply</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="soy">soy</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="disease">disease</span>-<span word="preventing">preventing</span> <span word="properties">properties</span>, <span word="that">that</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="mean">mean</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="therefore">therefore</span> <span word="fight">fight</span> <span word="chronic">chronic</span> <span word="fatigue">fatigue</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="chronic">chronic</span> <span word="depression">depression</span>. <span word="Fatigue">Fatigue</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="depression">depression</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="considered">considered</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="diseases">diseases</span> , <span word="therefore">therefore</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="soy">soy</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="disease">disease</span>-<span word="fighting">fighting</span> <span word="properties">properties</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="effect">effect</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="nondiseases">nondiseases</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="fatigue">fatigue</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="depression">depression</span>. <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="even">even</span> <span word="assuming">assuming</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="fatigue">fatigue</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="depression">depression</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="diseases">diseases</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="specifically">specifically</span> <span word="mentioned">mentioned</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="diseases">diseases</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="soy">soy</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="isoflavones">isoflavones</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="prevent">prevent</span>. <span word="Perhaps">Perhaps</span> <span word="soy">soy</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="prevent">prevent</span> <span word="osteoporosis">osteoporosis</span> , <span word="mumps">mumps</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="chicken">chicken</span> <span word="pox">pox</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="mean">mean</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="specifically">specifically</span> <span word="address">address</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="chronic">chronic</span> <span word="fatigue">fatigue</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="chronic">chronic</span> <span word="depression">depression</span>. <span word="These">These</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="critical">critical</span> <span word="weaknesses">weaknesses</span> <span word="alone">alone</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="unconvincing">unconvincing</span>.</p>
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