GRE AWA 范文 ——Issue 9
<p> 编辑点评： <span word="GRE">GRE</span>的写作部分是不少考生头疼的部分，不仅考察考生的英语能力更是考察学生的逻辑与思维能力。多阅读优质范文无疑对<span word="GRE">GRE</span>写作有很大的帮助。本系列为大家挑选了<span word="ISSUE">ISSUE</span>部分的优质范文。</p><p> <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="luxuries">luxuries</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="conveniences">conveniences</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="contemporary">contemporary</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="entirely">entirely</span> <span word="harmless">harmless</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="fact">fact</span>,<span word="prevent">prevent</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="developing">developing</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="truly">truly</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="independent">independent</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span>.</p><p> <span word="Do">Do</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="luxuries">luxuries</span> <span word="serve">serve</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="undermine">undermine</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="strenghth">strenghth</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="indepedence">indepedence</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span>? <span word="The">The</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="believes">believes</span> <span word="so">so</span> ,<span word="and">and</span> <span word="i">i</span> <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="agree">agree</span>.<span word="Consider">Consider</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span>,<span word="for">for</span> <span word="example">example</span> .<span word="Most">Most</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="necessarity">necessarity</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="luxury">luxury</span>;<span word="yet">yet</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="aptly">aptly</span> <span word="supports">supports</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="point">point</span>.<span word="To">To</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="depend">depend</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="cars">cars</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="crutches">crutches</span>,<span word="they">they</span> <span word="prevent">prevent</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="truly">truly</span> <span word="independent">independent</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="character">character</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span>.</p><p> <span word="Consider">Consider</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="effect">effect</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="independence">independence</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span>.<span word="In">In</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="respects">respects</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="automobiles">automobiles</span> <span word="serves">serves</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enhances">enhances</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="independence">independence</span> .<span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>,<span word="cars">cars</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="isolated">isolated</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="depressed">depressed</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="transportation">transportation</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="independent">independent</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="pursing">pursing</span> <span word="gainful">gainful</span> <span word="employment">employment</span> <span word="outside">outside</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="communities">communities</span>.<span word="And">And</span> <span word="teenagers">teenagers</span> <span word="discover">discover</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="owning">owning</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="car">car</span>,<span word="or">or</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="borrowing">borrowing</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="occasion">occasion</span>,<span word="affords">affords</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="needed">needed</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="independence">independence</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>.</p><p> <span word="However">However</span>,<span word="cars">cars</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="diminished">diminished</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="independence">independence</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="significant">significant</span> <span word="respects">respects</span>.<span word="We">We</span> <span word="ve">ve</span> <span word="grown">grown</span> <span word="dependent">dependent</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="cars">cars</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="commuting">commuting</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span> .<span word="We">We</span> <span word="rely">rely</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="crutches">crutches</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="trips">trips</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="corner">corner</span> <span word="store">store</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="carting">carting</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="school">school</span>.<span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>,<span word="the">the</span> <span word="car">car</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="assorted">assorted</span> <span word="physical">physical</span> <span word="destinations">destinations</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="attainment">attainment</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="socioeconomic">socioeconomic</span> <span word="golas">golas</span>,<span word="insofar">insofar</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="symbol">symbol</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="status">status</span>.<span word="In">In</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> ,<span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="observation">observation</span> <span word="many">many</span>,<span word="if">if</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="most">most</span>, <span word="working">working</span> <span word="professionals">professionals</span> <span word="willingly">willingly</span> <span word="undermine">undermine</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="security">security</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sake">sake</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="seen">seen</span> <span word="driving">driving</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="SUV">SUV</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="afford">afford</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="feeling">feeling</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="appearance">appearance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="strength">strength</span> ,<span word="or">or</span> <span word="machismo">machismo</span>.<span word="But">But</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="feeling">feeling</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="nothing">nothing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="character">character</span>.</p>
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