GRE issue写作范文：技术进步
<p> 编辑点评： 以下是<span word="GRE">GRE</span>考试写作部分<span word="issue">issue</span>的优秀写作实例，通过这些优秀范文或是习作，考生可以借鉴里面的短语、句子或思路，给自己的写作找一些思路和灵感。</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="primary">primary</span> <span word="goal">goal</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="technological">technological</span> <span word="advancement">advancement</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="everyone">everyone</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="leisure">leisure</span> <span word="time">time</span>.</p><p> 正文：</p><p> <span word="Should">Should</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="primary">primary</span> <span word="goal">goal</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="technological">technological</span> <span word="advancement">advancement</span> <span word="rested">rested</span> <span word="upon">upon</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="improvement">improvement</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="leisure">leisure</span> <span word="time">time</span>? <span word="The">The</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="claims">claims</span> <span word="so">so</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="concede">concede</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="technological">technological</span> <span word="advancement">advancement</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="either">either</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="primary">primary</span> <span word="goal">goal</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="everyone">everyone</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="leisure">leisure</span> <span word="time">time</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="concede">concede</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="technological">technological</span> <span word="innovation">innovation</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span>. <span word="Just">Just</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wide">wide</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="technology">technology</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="designing">designing</span> <span word="tools">tools</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="software">software</span> <span word="installed">installed</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="facilitate">facilitate</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="word">word</span>-<span word="processing">processing</span> <span word="software">software</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="paper">paper</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="boring">boring</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="time">time</span>-<span word="consuming">consuming</span> <span word="task">task</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="while">while</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="vast">vast</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="available">available</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span> <span word="cut">cut</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="spending">spending</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="searching">searching</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="thousands">thousands</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="books">books</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="libraries">libraries</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="life">life</span>, <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="transportation">transportation</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="car">car</span>, <span word="plane">plane</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="subway">subway</span> <span word="act">act</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="efficient">efficient</span> <span word="agents">agents</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="carry">carry</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="home">home</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="places">places</span> <span word="thousands">thousands</span> <span word="miles">miles</span> <span word="away">away</span>.</p><p> <span word="Agreeing">Agreeing</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="revolution">revolution</span> <span word="effects">effects</span> <span word="brought">brought</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="conveniences">conveniences</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="against">against</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="aspects">aspects</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="primary">primary</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="carried">carried</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="technological">technological</span> <span word="advancement">advancement</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="outweigh">outweigh</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="defines">defines</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="simple">simple</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="crucial">crucial</span> <span word="mission">mission</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="tackling">tackling</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="urgent">urgent</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="Thousands">Thousands</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="suffer">suffer</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="hunger">hunger</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="insufficiency">insufficiency</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="medical">medical</span> <span word="care">care</span>. <span word="Environmental">Environmental</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="greenhouse">greenhouse</span> <span word="effect">effect</span>, <span word="deforestation">deforestation</span>, <span word="wild">wild</span>-<span word="animal">animal</span> <span word="extinction">extinction</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="deserve">deserve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="effort">effort</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="beings">beings</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="technology">technology</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="sense">sense</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="set">set</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="primary">primary</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="technology">technology</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="face">face</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="danger">danger</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="obsessed">obsessed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sole">sole</span> <span word="ideology">ideology</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="pragmatism">pragmatism</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="neglecting">neglecting</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>.</p>
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