GRE AWA 范文 ——Issue 10
<p> 编辑点评： <span word="GRE">GRE</span>的写作部分是不少考生头疼的部分，不仅考察考生的英语能力更是考察学生的逻辑与思维能力。多阅读优质范文无疑对<span word="GRE">GRE</span>写作有很大的帮助。本系列为大家挑选了<span word="ISSUE">ISSUE</span>部分的优质范文。</p><p> <span word="Most">Most</span> <span word="cultures">cultures</span> <span word="encourage">encourage</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="sacrifice">sacrifice</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="personalities">personalities</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="people">people</span>.<span word="Thus">Thus</span> ,<span word="most">most</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="afraid">afraid</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="behave">behave</span> <span word="differently">differently</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="excluded">excluded</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="claims">claims</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="cultures">cultures</span> <span word="encourage">encourage</span> <span word="conformity">conformity</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="expense">expense</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="individuality">individuality</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="conform">conform</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="excluded">excluded</span>.<span word="While">While</span> <span word="i">i</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="prong">prong</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="dual">dual</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="overall">overall</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="empirical">empirical</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span>,<span word="I">I</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="exception">exception</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="prong">prong</span>;<span word="aside">aside</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cultures">cultures</span> <span word="created">created</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="oppressive">oppressive</span> <span word="political">political</span> <span word="regimes">regimes</span>,<span word="no">no</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="encourage">encourage</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="members">members</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="conform">conform</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="prevailing">prevailing</span> <span word="ways">ways</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="thought">thought</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="behavior">behavior</span>;<span word="in">in</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> ,<span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="cultures">cultures</span> <span word="attempt">attempt</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opposite">opposite</span>.</p><p> <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="threshold">threshold</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> ,<span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="distinguish">distinguish</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="conformity">conformity</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="oppressive">oppressive</span> <span word="ruling">ruling</span> <span word="state">state</span> <span word="imposes">imposes</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="conformity">conformity</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="free">free</span> <span word="democratic">democratic</span> <span word="society">society</span>.<span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="former">former</span> <span word="case">case</span> , <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="encouraged">encouraged</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="coerced">coerced</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="suppressing">suppressing</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="personality">personality</span>; <span word="and">and</span> <span word="indeed">indeed</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="afraid">afraid</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="behave">behave</span> <span word="differently">differently</span>-<span word="but">but</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="excluded">excluded</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="punishment">punishment</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="persecution">persecution</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="state">state</span>.<span word="the">the</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="Communist">Communist</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Fascist">Fascist</span> <span word="regimes">regimes</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="fitting">fitting</span> <span word="examples">examples</span>.<span word="With">With</span> <span word="respect">respect</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="free">free</span> <span word="democratic">democratic</span> <span word="societies">societies</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="tempting">tempting</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="dismiss">dismiss</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="dual">dual</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="hand">hand</span> .<span word="After">After</span> <span word="all">all</span> ,<span word="true">true</span> <span word="democratic">democratic</span> <span word="states">states</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="predicted">predicted</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="freedoms">freedoms</span>-<span word="of">of</span> <span word="choice">choice</span> ,<span word="speech">speech</span>,<span word="expression">expression</span>,<span word="religion">religion</span>,<span word="and">and</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="forth">forth</span>.<span word="Ostensibly">Ostensibly</span> ,<span word="these">these</span> <span word="freedoms">freedoms</span> <span word="serve">serve</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="promote">promote</span> <span word="individuality">individuality</span>,<span word="even">even</span> <span word="non">non</span>-<span word="conformity">conformity</span>,<span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="personas">personas</span>,<span word="our">our</span> <span word="lifestyles">lifestyles</span> ,<span word="and">and</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="opinioons">opinioons</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="attitudes">attitudes</span>.</p>
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