GRE Issue写作优秀实例：更新领导保持活力
<p> 编辑点评： 很多参加<span word="GRE">GRE</span>的考生在做<span word="GRE">GRE</span>写作的时候都没有写提纲的习惯，这是非常不好的。提纲在<span word="GRE">GRE</span>写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起，我们将对<span word="GRE">GRE</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>进行分析，弄清写作思路，这样才能让<span word="GRE">GRE</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>得高分。</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="profession">profession</span> <span word="business">business</span>, <span word="politics">politics</span>, <span word="education">education</span>, <span word="government">government</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="power">power</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="step">step</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="five">five</span> <span word="years">years</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="surest">surest</span> <span word="path">path</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="enterprise">enterprise</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="revitalization">revitalization</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="leadership">leadership</span>.</p><p> 在任何领域中 商业、政治、教育、政府 掌权者应该在五年后就让位。这是任何机构获得成功的最好的方式：通过更新领导者而保持活力。</p><p> 正文：</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="asserts">asserts</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="surest">surest</span> <span word="path">path</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="enterprise">enterprise</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="revitalization">revitalization</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="leadership">leadership</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="leader">leader</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="power">power</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="step">step</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="five">five</span> <span word="years">years</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="assertion">assertion</span> <span word="insofar">insofar</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="leadership">leadership</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="needed">needed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="maintain">maintain</span> <span word="strength">strength</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="energy">energy</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="areas">areas</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="politics">politics</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="business">business</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="comes">comes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="science">science</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="energy">energy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="experiences">experiences</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="crucial">crucial</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="enterprise">enterprise</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="discuss">discuss</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="assertion">assertion</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="contribute">contribute</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="assertion">assertion</span>. <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="leader">leader</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="easily">easily</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="left">left</span> <span word="behind">behind</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ever">ever</span>-<span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="advanced">advanced</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="advanced">advanced</span> <span word="management">management</span> <span word="methods">methods</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="power">power</span>. <span word="Especially">Especially</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="leaders">leaders</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="elected">elected</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="age">age</span>. <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="when">when</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="leader">leader</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="power">power</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="period">period</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="risk">risk</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="power">power</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="himself">himself</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="prevent">prevent</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="defects">defects</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="asserts">asserts</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="leadership">leadership</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="surest">surest</span> <span word="path">path</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="success">success</span>.</p>
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