GRE Issue写作优秀实例：艺术家
<p> 编辑点评： 很多参加<span word="GRE">GRE</span>的考生在做<span word="GRE">GRE</span>写作的时候都没有写提纲的习惯，这是非常不好的。提纲在<span word="GRE">GRE</span>写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起，我们将对<span word="GRE">GRE</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>进行分析，弄清写作思路，这样才能让<span word="GRE">GRE</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>得高分。</p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="artist">artist</span>, <span word="not">not</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="critic">critic</span>, <span word="who">who</span> <span word="gives">gives</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="lasting">lasting</span> <span word="value">value</span>.<span word="a">a</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="evaluates">evaluates</span> <span word="works">works</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="art">art</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="novels">novels</span>, <span word="films">films</span>, <span word="music">music</span>, <span word="paintings">paintings</span>, <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> 艺术家而不是评论家带给了社会一些具有持久价值的东西。</p><p> 评论家指的是评价艺术作品的人，例如小说、电影、绘画等。</p><p> 正文：</p><p> <span word="Who">Who</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="lasting">lasting</span> <span word="value">value</span>? <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="claims">claims</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="artist">artist</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="critic">critic</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="view">view</span>, <span word="while">while</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="firmly">firmly</span> <span word="confirmed">confirmed</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="artist">artist</span> <span word="created">created</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="art">art</span> <span word="work">work</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="begs">begs</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="question">question</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="overlooking">overlooking</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="function">function</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="critic">critic</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="artists">artists</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="created">created</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="artist">artist</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="emotion">emotion</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="art">art</span> <span word="work">work</span>. <span word="Undeniable">Undeniable</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="art">art</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="created">created</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="artist">artist</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="emotion">emotion</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="critic">critic</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="Van">Van</span> <span word="Gogh">Gogh</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="painted">painted</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sun">sun</span> <span word="flower">flower</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="hope">hope</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="Beethoven">Beethoven</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="composed">composed</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="symphonies">symphonies</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="Shakespeare">Shakespeare</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="created">created</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="vivid">vivid</span> <span word="characters">characters</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Julia">Julia</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Romeo">Romeo</span>. <span word="Without">Without</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="artists">artists</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="impossible">impossible</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="possess">possess</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="treasures">treasures</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="artists">artists</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="emotion">emotion</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="create">create</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="things">things</span>.<span word="When">When</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="listen">listen</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Beethoven">Beethoven</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="symphony">symphony</span>, <span word="most">most</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="composed">composed</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="blind">blind</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="provided">provided</span> <span word="confidence">confidence</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="graveness">graveness</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="reading">reading</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Julia">Julia</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Romeo">Romeo</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="beautiful">beautiful</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="be">be</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sun">sun</span> <span word="flower">flower</span> , <span word="we">we</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="yellow">yellow</span> <span word="flower">flower</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="wish">wish</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="hope">hope</span>. <span word="Hence">Hence</span>, <span word="without">without</span> <span word="artists">artists</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="emotion">emotion</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="masterpieces">masterpieces</span> <span word="now">now</span>.</p>
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