GRE Issue写作优秀实例：个人主义和社会更大利益
<p> 编辑点评： 很多参加<span word="GRE">GRE</span>的考生在做<span word="GRE">GRE</span>写作的时候都没有写提纲的习惯，这是非常不好的。提纲在<span word="GRE">GRE</span>写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起，我们将对<span word="GRE">GRE</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>进行分析，弄清写作思路，这样才能让<span word="GRE">GRE</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>得高分。</p><p> <span word="People">People</span> <span word="today">today</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="individualistic">individualistic</span>. <span word="Instead">Instead</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="pursuing">pursuing</span> <span word="self">self</span>-<span word="centered">centered</span>, <span word="separate">separate</span> <span word="goals">goals</span>,<span word="people">people</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="satisfaction">satisfaction</span> <span word="comes">comes</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="greater">greater</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="family">family</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="community">community</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="whole">whole</span>.</p><p> 现在的人们太个人主义了。与其追求以个人为中心和孤立的目标，人们更需要明白满足是源于为家庭、社区或者整个社会的更大利益的服务。</p><p> 正文：</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="economics">economics</span> <span word="stands">stands</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="basis">basis</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="core">core</span> <span word="assumptions">assumptions</span>, <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="private">private</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="strive">strive</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="good">good</span>, <span word="usually">usually</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="token">token</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="contribute">contribute</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="consciously">consciously</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="unconsciously">unconsciously</span>.<span word="Along">Along</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="free">free</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> <span word="goes">goes</span> <span word="individualism">individualism</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="seemingly">seemingly</span> <span word="amounts">amounts</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="egoism">egoism</span>. <span word="People">People</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="cease">cease</span> <span word="questioning">questioning</span> <span word="individualism">individualism</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="advocate">advocate</span> <span word="collectivism">collectivism</span> <span word="instead">instead</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="view">view</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="until">until</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="individualism">individualism</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="serves">serves</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="inherent">inherent</span> <span word="capability">capability</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="convert">convert</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="pursuits">pursuits</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="societal">societal</span> <span word="contributions">contributions</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="advocator">advocator</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="collectivism">collectivism</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="remember">remember</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sentence">sentence</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="passage">passage</span> <span word="criticizing">criticizing</span> <span word="individualism">individualism</span> <span word="fiercely">fiercely</span>: <span word="Individualism">Individualism</span> +<span word="individualism">individualism</span>=<span word="collectivism">collectivism</span>? <span word="Of">Of</span> <span word="course">course</span>, <span word="individualism">individualism</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="collectivism">collectivism</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="simply">simply</span> <span word="plus">plus</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="also">also</span>, <span word="even">even</span> <span word="now">now</span>, <span word="firmly">firmly</span> <span word="stand">stand</span> <span word="against">against</span> <span word="egoism">egoism</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="emphasizes">emphasizes</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="self">self</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="extreme">extreme</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="ignores">ignores</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="despises">despises</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="somewhat">somewhat</span> <span word="anti">anti</span>-<span word="social">social</span>.</p>
页:
[1]