GRE Issue写作优秀实例：教育问题
<p> 编辑点评： 很多参加<span word="GRE">GRE</span>的考生在做<span word="GRE">GRE</span>写作的时候都没有写提纲的习惯，这是非常不好的。提纲在<span word="GRE">GRE</span>写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起，我们将对<span word="GRE">GRE</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>进行分析，弄清写作思路，这样才能让<span word="GRE">GRE</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>得高分。</p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="primarily">primarily</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="formal">formal</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="tries">tries</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="perpetuate">perpetuate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ideas">ideas</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="favors">favors</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="discredit">discredit</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ideas">ideas</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="fears">fears</span>.</p><p> 如果一个文化想要它认为好的理念永世长存而摈弃它厌恶的理念，主要是通过正规的教育。</p><p> 正文：</p><p> <span word="Admittedly">Admittedly</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="hopes">hopes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="perpetuate">perpetuate</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="values">values</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="formal">formal</span> <span word="education">education</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="mean">mean</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="formal">formal</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="function">function</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="purpose">purpose</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="expects">expects</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="era">era</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="vividly">vividly</span> <span word="characterized">characterized</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="highly">highly</span> <span word="advanced">advanced</span> <span word="formal">formal</span> <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="system">system</span>: <span word="almost">almost</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="contemporary">contemporary</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="deems">deems</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="section">section</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="allocates">allocates</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="largest">largest</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="resources">resources</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="formal">formal</span> <span word="education">education</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="along">along</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="unprecedented">unprecedented</span> <span word="emphasis">emphasis</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="formal">formal</span> <span word="education">education</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="finds">finds</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="difficult">difficult</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="instill">instill</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="favored">favored</span> <span word="ideas">ideas</span>, <span word="values">values</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="traditions">traditions</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="members">members</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>,<span word="no">no</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="encourages">encourages</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="members">members</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="divorce">divorce</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="divorce">divorce</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="witnessed">witnessed</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="striking">striking</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="the">the</span> 2<span word="nd">nd</span> <span word="World">World</span> <span word="War">War</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="country">country</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="formal">formal</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="backward">backward</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="available">available</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="people">people</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ideas">ideas</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="traditions">traditions</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="culture">culture</span> <span word="values">values</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="easier">easier</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="perpetuated">perpetuated</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="generations">generations</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="generations">generations</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="traditional">traditional</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="traditions">traditions</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="existed">existed</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="thousands">thousands</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="everything">everything</span> <span word="changes">changes</span> <span word="rapidly">rapidly</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="nothing">nothing</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="safely">safely</span> <span word="regarded">regarded</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="permanent">permanent</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="having">having</span> <span word="sustained">sustained</span> <span word="values">values</span>.</p>
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