GRE Issue写作优秀实例：挽救濒危物种
<p> 编辑点评： 很多参加<span word="GRE">GRE</span>的考生在做<span word="GRE">GRE</span>写作的时候都没有写提纲的习惯，这是非常不好的。提纲在<span word="GRE">GRE</span>写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起，我们将对<span word="GRE">GRE</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>进行分析，弄清写作思路，这样才能让<span word="GRE">GRE</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>得高分。</p><p> <span word="At">At</span> <span word="various">various</span> <span word="times">times</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="geological">geological</span> <span word="past">past</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="species">species</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="extinct">extinct</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="natural">natural</span>, <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="human">human</span>, <span word="processes">processes</span>. <span word="Thus">Thus</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="justification">justification</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="extraordinary">extraordinary</span> <span word="efforts">efforts</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="save">save</span> <span word="endangered">endangered</span> <span word="species">species</span>.</p><p> 在过去不同的地质时期，许多的物种因为自然作用而非人类行为而灭绝。因此，人类社会为了挽救濒危物种而付出的巨大努力，尤其是以大量的资金和工作机会为代价，这样做是毫无道理的。</p><p> 正文：</p><p> <span word="As">As</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="ecological">ecological</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="serious">serious</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="controversy">controversy</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="extraordinary">extraordinary</span> <span word="efforts">efforts</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="save">save</span> <span word="endangered">endangered</span> <span word="species">species</span>. <span word="Somebody">Somebody</span> <span word="claims">claims</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="various">various</span> <span word="times">times</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="geological">geological</span> <span word="past">past</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="species">species</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="extinct">extinct</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="natural">natural</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span>.</p><p> <span word="Indeed">Indeed</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="species">species</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="extraordinary">extraordinary</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="relevant">relevant</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="beings">beings</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="excuse">excuse</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="shirk">shirk</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="protect">protect</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="Darwin">Darwin</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="theory">theory</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="evolution">evolution</span> <span word="tells">tells</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="species">species</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="suit">suit</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="natural">natural</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="saying">saying</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="China">China</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fittest">fittest</span> <span word="survive">survive</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="balance">balance</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ecological">ecological</span>, <span word="natural">natural</span> <span word="itself">itself</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="choose">choose</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="species">species</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="useful">useful</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="destroy">destroy</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="biological">biological</span> <span word="system">system</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="since">since</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="beings">beings</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="contemporary">contemporary</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="developing">developing</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="extinction">extinction</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="species">species</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="accelerated">accelerated</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="acceleration">acceleration</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="seriously">seriously</span> <span word="influence">influence</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="natural">natural</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="destroys">destroys</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="balance">balance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="geological">geological</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="mass">mass</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="data">data</span> <span word="showing">showing</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="species">species</span> <span word="disappeared">disappeared</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="year">year</span>, <span word="every">every</span> <span word="day">day</span>, <span word="every">every</span> <span word="hour">hour</span>, <span word="even">even</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="second">second</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="extremely">extremely</span> <span word="amazed">amazed</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="years">years</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="largest">largest</span> <span word="animal">animal</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>--<span word="whale">whale</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="catched">catched</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="killed">killed</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="quantity">quantity</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="making">making</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="whale">whale</span> <span word="oil">oil</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="produce">produce</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="pets">pets</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="vanity">vanity</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="desire">desire</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="precious">precious</span> <span word="species">species</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="going">going</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="extinct">extinct</span>. <span word="Undoubtedly">Undoubtedly</span>, <span word="human">human</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="responsible">responsible</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="destroys">destroys</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="natural">natural</span>.</p>
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