GRE Issue写作优秀实例：技术影响之交流
<p> 编辑点评： 很多参加<span word="GRE">GRE</span>的考生在做<span word="GRE">GRE</span>写作的时候都没有写提纲的习惯，这是非常不好的。提纲在<span word="GRE">GRE</span>写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起，我们将对<span word="GRE">GRE</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>进行分析，弄清写作思路，这样才能让<span word="GRE">GRE</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>得高分。</p><p> <span word="High">High</span>-<span word="speed">speed</span> <span word="electronic">electronic</span> <span word="communications">communications</span> <span word="media">media</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="electronic">electronic</span> <span word="mail">mail</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="television">television</span>, <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="prevent">prevent</span> <span word="meaningful">meaningful</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="thoughtful">thoughtful</span> <span word="communication">communication</span>.</p><p> 高速电子通讯媒体，例如电子邮件和电视，在逐渐地抑制有意义的和有思想性的交流。</p><p> 正文：</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="seducive">seducive</span>:<span word="the">the</span> <span word="global">global</span> <span word="networks">networks</span> <span word="transparently">transparently</span> <span word="transiting">transiting</span> <span word="megabytes">megabytes</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="fractions">fractions</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="second">second</span>; <span word="client">client</span>/<span word="server">server</span> <span word="softwares">softwares</span> <span word="supporting">supporting</span> <span word="fabulous">fabulous</span> <span word="real">real</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="multimedia">multimedia</span> <span word="presentations">presentations</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="PC">PC</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="MAC">MAC</span> <span word="workstations">workstations</span>; <span word="effortless">effortless</span> <span word="visits">visits</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="virtual">virtual</span> <span word="reality">reality</span> <span word="words">words</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="interpersonal">interpersonal</span> <span word="communication">communication</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="increasingly">increasingly</span> <span word="meaningful">meaningful</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="thoughtful">thoughtful</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="appearance">appearance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="high">high</span>-<span word="speed">speed</span> <span word="electronic">electronic</span> <span word="communications">communications</span> <span word="media">media</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="electronic">electronic</span> <span word="mail">mail</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="television">television</span> <span word="accumulates">accumulates</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="geographicla">geographicla</span> <span word="places">places</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="conference">conference</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="facilitate">facilitate</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="communication">communication</span>.</p><p> <span word="No">No</span> <span word="field">field</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="terms">terms</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="commercial">commercial</span> <span word="intercourse">intercourse</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="electronic">electronic</span> <span word="communication">communication</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="save">save</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="engaged">engaged</span> <span word="businessmen">businessmen</span> <span word="plenty">plenty</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="time">time</span> ,<span word="energy">energy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="money">money</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="words">words</span>, <span word="make">make</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="Instead">Instead</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="flights">flights</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="trades">trades</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="people">people</span>, <span word="now">now</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="businessman">businessman</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="sit">sit</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="front">front</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="screen">screen</span> , <span word="and">and</span> <span word="click">click</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="keys">keys</span>. <span word="While">While</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="expensive">expensive</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="call">call</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="definite">definite</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="meeting">meeting</span>, <span word="by">by</span> <span word="utilizing">utilizing</span> <span word="electronic">electronic</span> <span word="television">television</span>, <span word="electronic">electronic</span> <span word="conference">conference</span> <span word="presently">presently</span> <span word="goes">goes</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="internet">internet</span>, <span word="ecnomically">ecnomically</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="efficiently">efficiently</span>. <span word="Thereby">Thereby</span> <span word="electronic">electronic</span> <span word="media">media</span> <span word="facilitate">facilitate</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="meaningful">meaningful</span> <span word="communication">communication</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="contributes">contributes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="prosperity">prosperity</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="reality">reality</span>.</p>
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