GRE Issue写作优秀实例：社会实践和全面教育
<p> 编辑点评： 很多参加<span word="GRE">GRE</span>的考生在做<span word="GRE">GRE</span>写作的时候都没有写提纲的习惯，这是非常不好的。提纲在<span word="GRE">GRE</span>写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起，我们将对<span word="GRE">GRE</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>进行分析，弄清写作思路，这样才能让<span word="GRE">GRE</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>得高分。</p><p> <span word="Colleges">Colleges</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="require">require</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="engage">engage</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="public">public</span>-<span word="service">service</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="assure">assure</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="receives">receives</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="balanced">balanced</span>, <span word="well">well</span>-<span word="rounded">rounded</span> <span word="education">education</span>.</p><p> 大学应该要求学生们参加公益活动，这也是为了保证每一个学生都能获得平衡而全面的教育。</p><p> 正文：</p><p> <span word="College">College</span> <span word="students">students</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="backbone">backbone</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="future">future</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="rounded">rounded</span>,<span word="obtaining">obtaining</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="balance">balance</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="acquirement">acquirement</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cultivation">cultivation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="virtues">virtues</span>. <span word="Thus">Thus</span>, <span word="colleges">colleges</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="universities">universities</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="encourage">encourage</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="engage">engage</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="public">public</span>-<span word="service">service</span> <span word="activities">activities</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="proved">proved</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="helpful">helpful</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="balanced">balanced</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="present">present</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="system">system</span>, <span word="including">including</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="education">education</span>, <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="blamed">blamed</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="failure">failure</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="educate">educate</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span>; <span word="while">while</span> <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="public">public</span>-<span word="service">service</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="help">help</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="sense">sense</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="solve">solve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>. <span word="Just">Just</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="decades">decades</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="colleges">colleges</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="placed">placed</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="emphasis">emphasis</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="career">career</span>-<span word="oriented">oriented</span> <span word="education">education</span>. <span word="That">That</span> <span word="is">is</span>, <span word="students">students</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="taught">taught</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="knowledgeable">knowledgeable</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="survive">survive</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="full">full</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="rigid">rigid</span> <span word="competition">competition</span>; <span word="while">while</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="previously">previously</span> <span word="valued">valued</span> <span word="virtue">virtue</span> <span word="cultivation">cultivation</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="practical">practical</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="students">students</span>, <span word="although">although</span> <span word="probably">probably</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="purpose">purpose</span>, <span word="are">are</span> <span word="left">left</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="impression">impression</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="decent">decent</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="means">means</span>, <span word="even">even</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="interests">interests</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="responsible">responsible</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="decay">decay</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="obligation">obligation</span>. <span word="Fortunately">Fortunately</span>, <span word="little">little</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="little">little</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="growing">growing</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="colleges">colleges</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="realized">realized</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="managed">managed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="create">create</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="opportunities">opportunities</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="participate">participate</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="public">public</span>-<span word="service">service</span> <span word="activities">activities</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="weekends">weekends</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="nursing">nursing</span> <span word="houses">houses</span>. <span word="By">By</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="this">this</span>, <span word="students">students</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="aware">aware</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="members">members</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="therefore">therefore</span> <span word="adjust">adjust</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="morally">morally</span> <span word="acceptable">acceptable</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="future">future</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="interests">interests</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="mind">mind</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="time">time</span>.</p>
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