GRE Issue写作优秀实例：教育合作
<p> 编辑点评： 很多参加<span word="GRE">GRE</span>的考生在做<span word="GRE">GRE</span>写作的时候都没有写提纲的习惯，这是非常不好的。提纲在<span word="GRE">GRE</span>写作当中起到了至关重要的作用。从今天起，我们将对<span word="GRE">GRE</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>进行分析，弄清写作思路，这样才能让<span word="GRE">GRE</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>得高分。</p><p> <span word="Both">Both</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="communities">communities</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="involved">involved</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="schools">schools</span>. <span word="Education">Education</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="leave">leave</span> <span word="solely">solely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="group">group</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="educators">educators</span>.</p><p> 父母和社会都必须参与到地方的学校中。教育太重要了以至于不能把教育完全交给一群职业教育者。</p><p> 正文：</p><p> <span word="Education">Education</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="key">key</span> <span word="issues">issues</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="Just">Just</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="promoting">promoting</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="standard">standard</span>, <span word="education">education</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="promoting">promoting</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="future">future</span> <span word="well">well</span>-<span word="being">being</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="totally">totally</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="leave">leave</span> <span word="solely">solely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="group">group</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="educators">educators</span>. <span word="Local">Local</span> <span word="schools">schools</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="constitute">constitute</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="essencial">essencial</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="education">education</span>, <span word="require">require</span> <span word="involvement">involvement</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="communities">communities</span>.</p><p> <span word="Admittedly">Admittedly</span>, <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="educators">educators</span> <span word="play">play</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="central">central</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="process">process</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="education">education</span>, <span word="particularly">particularly</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="education">education</span>. <span word="School">School</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="uniform">uniform</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="regulated">regulated</span>, <span word="where">where</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="stage">stage</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="knowlege">knowlege</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="vocational">vocational</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="educators">educators</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="draw">draw</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="practice">practice</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="regulations">regulations</span>, <span word="set">set</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="curricula">curricula</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="grades">grades</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="expected">expected</span> <span word="level">level</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="plans">plans</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span>, <span word="evaluation">evaluation</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="extracurricular">extracurricular</span> <span word="activities">activities</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="few">few</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="obligations">obligations</span> <span word="involve">involve</span> <span word="fave">fave</span>-<span word="to">to</span>-<span word="face">face</span> <span word="communication">communication</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="students">students</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="ruin">ruin</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="effects">effects</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="planning">planning</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="execution">execution</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="planned">planned</span> <span word="curriculum">curriculum</span> <span word="load">load</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="heavy">heavy</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="endure">endure</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="system">system</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="adjust">adjust</span> <span word="it">it</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="educators">educators</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="insist">insist</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="carry">carry</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="relying">relying</span> <span word="solely">solely</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="assumptions">assumptions</span>. <span word="Such">Such</span> <span word="case">case</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="detrimental">detrimental</span>, <span word="since">since</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="fed">fed</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="endless">endless</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="offered">offered</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="various">various</span> <span word="kinds">kinds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="fields">fields</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="standard">standard</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="ruined">ruined</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="cases">cases</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="communities">communities</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="supplement">supplement</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="adjust">adjust</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="schools">schools</span>.</p>
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