GRE issue写作优秀实例：冒险与计划
<p> <span word="Success">Success</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="realm">realm</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="comes">comes</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="chances">chances</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="risks">risks</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="careful">careful</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="cautious">cautious</span> <span word="planning">planning</span>.</p><p> 在生活的所有领域中，成功往往更多的来自于把握机会或者冒险而不是通过仔细谨慎的计划。</p><p> 正文：</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="asserts">asserts</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attain">attain</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="chances">chances</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="risks">risks</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="planning">planning</span> <span word="carefully">carefully</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="cautiously">cautiously</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="after">after</span> <span word="comparing">comparing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="characteristics">characteristics</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="careful">careful</span> <span word="planning">planning</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="chances">chances</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="strongly">strongly</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pursuit">pursuit</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="success">success</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="competitive">competitive</span> <span word="sports">sports</span>, <span word="while">while</span> <span word="making">making</span> <span word="appropriate">appropriate</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="plans">plans</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="competition">competition</span> <span word="strategies">strategies</span> <span word="constitute">constitute</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="conditions">conditions</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="winning">winning</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="matches">matches</span>, <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="risks">risks</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="almost">almost</span> <span word="inevitable">inevitable</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="athletes">athletes</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="coaches">coaches</span> <span word="confront">confront</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sudden">sudden</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="influence">influence</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="course">course</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="match">match</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span> <span word="beforehand">beforehand</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="competitive">competitive</span> <span word="sports">sports</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="widely">widely</span> <span word="acknowledged">acknowledged</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="scientific">scientific</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="contributes">contributes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="athletes">athletes</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="performance">performance</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="matches">matches</span>. <span word="Good">Good</span> <span word="competition">competition</span> <span word="strategies">strategies</span>, <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="resulting">resulting</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="allocation">allocation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="physical">physical</span> <span word="force">force</span>, <span word="better">better</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="skills">skills</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="scoring">scoring</span>, <span word="also">also</span> <span word="play">play</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="vital">vital</span> <span word="role">role</span>.</p><p> <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="when">when</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="star">star</span> <span word="players">players</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="soccer">soccer</span> <span word="team">team</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="basketball">basketball</span> <span word="team">team</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="off">off</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="game">game</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="fail">fail</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="implement">implement</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="chief">chief</span> <span word="coachs">coachs</span> <span word="strategic">strategic</span> <span word="intention">intention</span>, <span word="leaving">leaving</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="team">team</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="adverseness">adverseness</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="coach">coach</span> <span word="faces">faces</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="choice">choice</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="substitute">substitute</span> <span word="he">he</span>/<span word="she">she</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="not">not</span>. <span word="No">No</span> <span word="doubt">doubt</span> <span word="substituting">substituting</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="star">star</span> <span word="player">player</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bench">bench</span> <span word="player">player</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="risk">risk</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bench">bench</span> <span word="player">player</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="perform">perform</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="star">star</span> <span word="player">player</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="matters">matters</span> <span word="worse">worse</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="happens">happens</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="substitution">substitution</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="incur">incur</span> <span word="discontentment">discontentment</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="players">players</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="critique">critique</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="teams">teams</span> <span word="fans">fans</span>, <span word="media">media</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="boss">boss</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="capability">capability</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="coach">coach</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="suspected">suspected</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="he">he</span>/<span word="she">she</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="fired">fired</span>. <span word="Nevertheless">Nevertheless</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="coach">coach</span> <span word="dares">dares</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="risk">risk</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="substitute">substitute</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="poorly">poorly</span> <span word="performed">performed</span> <span word="star">star</span> <span word="player">player</span>, <span word="his">his</span>/<span word="her">her</span> <span word="team">team</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="probably">probably</span> <span word="lose">lose</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="game">game</span>. <span word="Taking">Taking</span> <span word="chances">chances</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="risks">risks</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="reasonable">reasonable</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="dealing">dealing</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span> <span word="previously">previously</span>. <span word="So">So</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="competitive">competitive</span> <span word="sports">sports</span>, <span word="planning">planning</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="risking">risking</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span>.</p>
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