GRE写作应该如何改错
<p> 下面对<span word="GRE">GRE</span>写作纰漏的更正进行介绍，希望对您的<span word="GRE">GRE</span>考试会有所帮助。</p><p> 原稿</p><p> 语言修改</p><p> <span word="And">And</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mainstream">mainstream</span> <span word="science">science</span> <span word="plays">plays</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="vital">vital</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="reasonable">reasonable</span> <span word="methods">methods</span>. <span word="These">These</span> <span word="science">science</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="practical">practical</span> <span word="experiments">experiments</span>, <span word="carefully">carefully</span> <span word="analize">analize</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="seem">seem</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="nonmainstream">nonmainstream</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="satisfying">satisfying</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="needs">needs</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="under">under</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="artless">artless</span> <span word="face">face</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="real">real</span> <span word="help">help</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="science">science</span> <span word="plays">plays</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="vital">vital</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="providing">providing</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span> <span word="methods">methods</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="conduct">conduct</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="Science">Science</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="practical">practical</span> <span word="experiments">experiments</span>, <span word="careful">careful</span> <span word="analysis">analysis</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="seem">seem</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="miraculous">miraculous</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="nonmainstream">nonmainstream</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="satisfying">satisfying</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="needs">needs</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="under">under</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="artless">artless</span> <span word="face">face</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="real">real</span> <span word="help">help</span>.</p><p> <span word="GRE">GRE</span>写作内容点评及修改</p><p> 这一段大问题跟前面类似，只是提出了主流的科学给人们提供合理的方法。这些科学是基于实验，仔细的分析和逻辑的方法的。它们看上去不如非主流的追求那样满足人们的追求，但是却能给人提供真正的帮助。这是作者的观点，但是没有具体说明科学是如何给人们提供合理的方法，缺乏真正能够支持论点的实例。下面的修改范例在内容上对原稿进行了补充。不仅提出科学不像那些迷信那样能够给人们提供奇迹的、不可思议的方法，但是在科学朴实的外表之下它能够给人们带来真正的帮助，并例举了</p>
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