GRE写作范文中的亮点句分析
<p> 新<span word="GRE">GRE</span>写作范文</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="memo">memo</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="director">director</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Silver">Silver</span> <span word="Screen">Screen</span> <span word="Movie">Movie</span> <span word="Production">Production</span> <span word="Company">Company</span>.</p><p> <span word="According">According</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="report">report</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="marketing">marketing</span> <span word="department">department</span>, <span word="fewer">fewer</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="attended">attended</span> <span word="movies">movies</span> <span word="produced">produced</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="Silver">Silver</span> <span word="Screen">Screen</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="year">year</span>.</p><p> <span word="And">And</span> <span word="yet">yet</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="percentage">percentage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="generally">generally</span> <span word="favorable">favorable</span> <span word="comments">comments</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="movie">movie</span> <span word="reviewers">reviewers</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="specific">specific</span> <span word="Silver">Silver</span> <span word="Screen">Screen</span> <span word="movies">movies</span> <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="period">period</span>.</p><p> <span word="Clearly">Clearly</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="contents">contents</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="reviews">reviews</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="reaching">reaching</span> <span word="enough">enough</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="prospective">prospective</span> <span word="viewers">viewers</span>; <span word="so">so</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="lies">lies</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="movies">movies</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="publics">publics</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="awareness">awareness</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="movies">movies</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="available">available</span>.</p><p> <span word="Silver">Silver</span> <span word="Screen">Screen</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="therefore">therefore</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="budget">budget</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="reaching">reaching</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="producing">producing</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="movies">movies</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="presented">presented</span> <span word="above">above</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="relatively">relatively</span> <span word="sound">sound</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="fails">fails</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="recognize">recognize</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="elements">elements</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="evaluate">evaluate</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="situation">situation</span>. 这句话也很摸版化，但是重点分析一下这里<span word="evaluate">evaluate</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="situation">situation</span>，读了后面几段，我们会知道全是在考虑对外界的评估的。所以这一句话就指明了论证的核心，可以说统领全文。 <span word="The">The</span> <span word="idea">idea</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="invested">invested</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="helpful">helpful</span> <span word="one">one</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="perhaps">perhaps</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="unaware">unaware</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="current">current</span> <span word="reviews">reviews</span>.</p><p> 这句话实际上是在进行让步，承认了广告还是有用的，但是原因不同。点明了论证主题句，下面几段全是围绕着让广告更有效这个主题来写的，正如官方评语中就提到了本文有个明显的中心句，就是本句。 <span word="To">To</span> <span word="clarify">clarify</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="advertise">advertise</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="sales">sales</span>, <span word="however">however</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="due">due</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="circumstances">circumstances</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="decrease">decrease</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="publics">publics</span> <span word="overall">overall</span> <span word="attendance">attendance</span>, <span word="an">an</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="movies">movies</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="trust">trust</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opinions">opinions</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reviewers">reviewers</span>.这句话是对主题句的补充，提供了几种具体的他因的论证方向，更重要的作用是，把主题句给打拆开几个小的分枝论点，从而方便下面的讨论。</p>
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