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GRE作文考试衔接问题处理方法与技巧(下)

<p>  另外,段落之间也有可能出现转折逻辑关系,相应的连接语也会发生变化,比如:</p><p>  <span word="One">One</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="fundamental">fundamental</span> <span word="agreement">agreement</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="withholding">withholding</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="gain">gain</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="maintain">maintain</span> <span word="political">political</span> <span word="leadership">leadership</span>.</p><p>  <span word="Another">Another</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="why">why</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="essentially">essentially</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="fully">fully</span> <span word="disclosing">disclosing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="types">types</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="threaten">threaten</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="safety">safety</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="perhaps">perhaps</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="national">national</span> <span word="security">security</span>.</p><p>  <span word="Having">Having</span> <span word="recognized">recognized</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="withholding">withholding</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="serve">serve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="interests">interests</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="public">public</span>, <span word="legitimate">legitimate</span> <span word="political">political</span> <span word="leadership">leadership</span> <span word="nevertheless">nevertheless</span> <span word="requires">requires</span> <span word="forthrightness">forthrightness</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="citizenry">citizenry</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="leaders">leaders</span> <span word="motives">motives</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="agenda">agenda</span>.</p><p>  上面是一篇<span word="GRE">GRE</span>北美范文的三个中间段的<span word="topic">topic</span> <span word="sentences">sentences</span>,可以发现,前两段之间是并列关系,而第三段和前两段之间就是转折关系</p><p>  <span word="Among">Among</span> <span word="sentences">sentences</span>:</p><p>  <span word="Office">Office</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="hardly">hardly</span> <span word="enough">enough</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="work">work</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span>, <span word="big">big</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="team">team</span> <span word="spirit">spirit</span>, <span word="rendering">rendering</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="emotional">emotional</span> <span word="distance">distance</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="other">other</span>.</p><p>  这两句话论证了为什么大公司缺乏必要的团队精神,员工之间感情淡漠,各自忙于工作是原因,缺乏<span word="team">team</span> <span word="spirit">spirit</span>是结果,所以前后两句话之间通过连接语<span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span>表明了因果逻辑关系。同样的,句子之间也有并列与转折关系:</p>
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