GRE写作：如何应用实例完成Issue 段落
<p> 很多同学在复习<span word="Issue">Issue</span>时往往感到困惑，很多时候面对着一个话题，无法整理出连贯的思路和相应的英文表达。导致这一现象的原因主要可以归纳成两点：1， 中文思路匮乏，即便是用中文也无话可说;2， 有话可说，但是无法用英文连贯表达。想要解决上述连个问题，最简单的方法就是在写作复习的过程中，以素材为中心，进行构造练习。</p><p> 英文写作中常有一句话，叫做无例不文，即没有实例就无法展开一片议论文。 实例，也就是我们常说的素材的灵活运用会从很大程度上增强论述的说服力。在逻辑写作中，考官更希望看到考生能熟练的使用具体而典型的实例，并通过对实例的分析来展开论述。遗憾的是，大部分中国考生对于实例的储备往往不是很充足，导致了在考场上无话可写的尴尬境地。为了解决这一问题，考生在复习阶段，熟悉题库完善提纲的同时，也应积极思考针对于每一道题相应的实例。</p><p> 在这里，我们选择一道<span word="Issue">Issue</span>题来具体讨论如何应用实例来完成<span word="Issue">Issue</span> 段落。 比如，题库的第61题：</p><p> 61 <span word="People">People</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="undertake">undertake</span> <span word="risky">risky</span> <span word="action">action</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="carefully">carefully</span> <span word="considered">considered</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="consequences">consequences</span>.</p><p> 题目内容： 只有在仔细分析过后果之后人们才可以采取有风险的行动。针对于这道<span word="Claim">Claim</span>类型的题目，提干要求我们给出自己对于观点的态度，以及相应的支持理由。简单来说， 站在社会角度，题目中的观点有一定的意义;我们可以围绕这个方面来进行展开，完成一个一百词左右的段落。首先给出自己的分论点： <span word="Admittedly">Admittedly</span>, <span word="people">people</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="carefully">carefully</span> <span word="considering">considering</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="consequences">consequences</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="risky">risky</span> <span word="actions">actions</span>. 这个句子内容上完成了任务，但是措辞有些低级，进行适度改写。 <span word="Admittedly">Admittedly</span>, <span word="human">human</span> <span word="beings">beings</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="benefited">benefited</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="attractive">attractive</span> <span word="strengths">strengths</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="potential">potential</span> <span word="weaknesses">weaknesses</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="seriously">seriously</span> <span word="weighed">weighed</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="allocating">allocating</span> <span word="precious">precious</span> <span word="manpower">manpower</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="material">material</span> <span word="resources">resources</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="risky">risky</span> <span word="activities">activities</span>. 观点给出之后，进行适度的分析拓展，即好处到底是什么：通过进行仔细的分析，社会及全人类可以尽最大限度的减少不必要的损失，从而走得更远。转译成英文如下：<span word="Those">Those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="responsible">responsible</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="leading">leading</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="analyzing">analyzing</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="risks">risks</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="carefully">carefully</span>, <span word="society">society</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="advance">advance</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="minimum">minimum</span> <span word="expense">expense</span>, <span word="thereby">thereby</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="progressing">progressing</span> <span word="towards">towards</span> <span word="sustainable">sustainable</span> <span word="development">development</span>. 观点适度展开之后，搜索相关实例以支撑起前两句的分析。这里我们可以选择很多不同的领域进行讨论。比如前一段北美热映的电影《蜘蛛侠》四就为我们提供了一个良好的素材。剧中的反派康纳斯博士在注射药剂后失控，变身成蜥蜴人，充分的证明了没有严密思考可能风险而采取行动的危害。我们因此完全可以从基因工程和相关改造上面来举例:</p>
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