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<p> <span word="Argument">Argument</span> 47</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="nation">nation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Claria">Claria</span> <span word="covers">covers</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="vast">vast</span> <span word="physical">physical</span> <span word="area">area</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="despite">despite</span> <span word="wide">wide</span> <span word="geographic">geographic</span> <span word="differences">differences</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="experiencing">experiencing</span> <span word="rising">rising</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="electricity">electricity</span>. <span word="A">A</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="household">household</span> <span word="electric">electric</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Claria">Claria</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="families">families</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="cooled">cooled</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="houses">houses</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="fans">fans</span> <span word="alone">alone</span> <span word="spent">spent</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="electricity">electricity</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="families">families</span> <span word="using">using</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="conditioners">conditioners</span> <span word="alone">alone</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="cooling">cooling</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="those">those</span> <span word="households">households</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="reported">reported</span> <span word="using">using</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="fans">fans</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="conditioners">conditioners</span> <span word="spent">spent</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="electricity">electricity</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="households">households</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="either">either</span> <span word="fans">fans</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="conditioners">conditioners</span> <span word="alone">alone</span>. <span word="Thus">Thus</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Claria">Claria</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="follow">follow</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="studys">studys</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="conditioners">conditioners</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="fans">fans</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="save">save</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="electricity">electricity</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span> <span word="recommends">recommends</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Claria">Claria</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="advise">advise</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="install">install</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="conditioners">conditioners</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="fans">fans</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="cooling">cooling</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="electricity">electricity</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="justify">justify</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="claim">claim</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span> <span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Claria">Claria</span> <span word="suffer">suffer</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rising">rising</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="electricity">electricity</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="cites">cites</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="using">using</span> <span word="fans">fans</span> <span word="alone">alone</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="using">using</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="conditioners">conditioners</span> <span word="alone">alone</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="using">using</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="conditioners">conditioners</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="fans">fans</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="either">either</span> <span word="using">using</span> <span word="fans">fans</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="conditioners">conditioners</span> <span word="alone">alone</span>. <span word="A">A</span> <span word="careful">careful</span> <span word="examination">examination</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="reveal">reveal</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="groundless">groundless</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="is">is</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span> <span word="fails">fails</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="account">account</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="geographical">geographical</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="analysis">analysis</span>. <span word="While">While</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="informed">informed</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="wide">wide</span> <span word="geographical">geographical</span> <span word="differences">differences</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="nation">nation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Claria">Claria</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="experiencing">experiencing</span> <span word="rising">rising</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="electricity">electricity</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arguer">arguer</span> <span word="fails">fails</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="clear">clear</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="exact">exact</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="percentage">percentage</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="national">national</span> <span word="population">population</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="geographical">geographical</span> <span word="distribution">distribution</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="small">small</span> <span word="portion">portion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="experiencing">experiencing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rising">rising</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="electricity">electricity</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="families">families</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="similar">similar</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>, <span word="then">then</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="former">former</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="electricity">electricity</span> <span word="sparingly">sparingly</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="case">case</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rising">rising</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="families">families</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="nothing">nothing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="electric">electric</span> <span word="appliance">appliance</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="cool">cool</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="houses">houses</span>. <span word="Or">Or</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="families">families</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="hot">hot</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="spending">spending</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="cooling">cooling</span>, <span word="then">then</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unwise">unwise</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="require">require</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="temperate">temperate</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="frigid">frigid</span> <span word="zones">zones</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="install">install</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="fans">fans</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="conditioners">conditioners</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="absence">absence</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="information">information</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="impossible">impossible</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="evaluate">evaluate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="recommended">recommended</span> <span word="policy">policy</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="intended">intended</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="household">household</span> <span word="nationwide">nationwide</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="electricity">electricity</span> <span word="cost">cost</span>.</p>
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