ETS6分GRE写作Issue部分范文欣赏
<p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="sample">sample</span> <span word="essays">essays</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="follow">follow</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="written">written</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="response">response</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="prompt">prompt</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="appears">appears</span> <span word="below">below</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="rater">rater</span> <span word="commentary">commentary</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="follows">follows</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="sample">sample</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="explains">explains</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="response">response</span> <span word="meets">meets</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="criteria">criteria</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="score">score</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="complete">complete</span> <span word="understanding">understanding</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="criteria">criteria</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="score">score</span> <span word="point">point</span>, <span word="see">see</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Analyze">Analyze</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="Issue">Issue</span> <span word="Scoring">Scoring</span> <span word="Guide">Guide</span>.</p><p> <span word="As">As</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="rely">rely</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="solve">solve</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="humans">humans</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="surely">surely</span> <span word="deteriorate">deteriorate</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="statement">statement</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="explain">explain</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="take">take</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="developing">developing</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="supporting">supporting</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="position">position</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="ways">ways</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="statement">statement</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="explain">explain</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="considerations">considerations</span> <span word="shape">shape</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="position">position</span>.</p><p> <span word="Note">Note</span>: <span word="All">All</span> <span word="responses">responses</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="reproduced">reproduced</span> <span word="exactly">exactly</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="written">written</span>, <span word="including">including</span> <span word="errors">errors</span>, <span word="misspellings">misspellings</span>, <span word="etc">etc</span>., <span word="if">if</span> <span word="any">any</span>.</p><p> <span word="Essay">Essay</span> <span word="Response">Response</span><span word="Score">Score</span> 6</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="statement">statement</span> <span word="linking">linking</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="negatively">negatively</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="free">free</span> <span word="thinking">thinking</span> <span word="plays">plays</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="century">century</span>. <span word="Surely">Surely</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="history">history</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="lived">lived</span> <span word="lives">lives</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="changed">changed</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="dramatically">dramatically</span>. <span word="A">A</span> <span word="quick">quick</span> <span word="reflection">reflection</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="typical">typical</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="reveals">reveals</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="revolutionized">revolutionized</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>. <span word="Most">Most</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="commute">commute</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="runs">runs</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="internal">internal</span> <span word="combustion">combustion</span> <span word="engine">engine</span>. <span word="During">During</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="workday">workday</span>, <span word="chances">chances</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="employee">employee</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="interact">interact</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="processes">processes</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="silicon">silicon</span> <span word="bridges">bridges</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="are">are</span> .09 <span word="microns">microns</span> <span word="wide">wide</span>. <span word="Upon">Upon</span> <span word="leaving">leaving</span> <span word="home">home</span>, <span word="family">family</span> <span word="members">members</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="reached">reached</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="wireless">wireless</span> <span word="networks">networks</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="utilize">utilize</span> <span word="satellites">satellites</span> <span word="orbiting">orbiting</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="earth">earth</span>. <span word="Each">Each</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="occurrences">occurrences</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="inconceivable">inconceivable</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> 19<span word="th">th</span> <span word="century">century</span>.</p>
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