GRE写作提纲举例指导（16）
<p> 16<span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="luxu">luxu</span> <span word="ries">ries</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="conveniences">conveniences</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="contemporary">contemporary</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="entirely">entirely</span> <span word="harmless">harmless</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="fact">fact</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="prevent">prevent</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="developing">developing</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="truly">truly</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="independent">independent</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span>.</p><p> 部分同意</p><p> 1、现代生活的便利确实使人们的对技术的依赖性越来越强</p><p> <span word="depend">depend</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="travel">travel</span>; <span word="depend">depend</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="calculat">calculat</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="calculation">calculation</span>; <span word="depend">depend</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="documents">documents</span>; <span word="depend">depend</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="formation">formation</span></p><p> 2、但是现代生活的便利也给人们带来了挑战，使变得 <span word="intellectually">intellectually</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="creat">creat</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span>, <span word="further">further</span> <span word="improvve">improvve</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="develop">develop</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="efficient">efficient</span>; <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="expected">expected</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="productivity">productivity</span></p><p> 3、工作的便利使人能够独立完成复杂任务 <span word="national">national</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="analysis">analysis</span></p><p> 16<span word="T">T</span> <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="luxuries">luxuries</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="conveniences">conveniences</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="contemporary">contemporary</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="entirely">entirely</span> <span word="harmless">harmless</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="fact">fact</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="prevent">prevent</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="developing">developing</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="truly">truly</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="independent">independent</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span>.</p><p> 尽管很多人认为现在奢侈安逸的生活是无害的，但实际上这样的生活阻止了人们培养坚强独立的性格</p><p> ① <span word="I">I</span> <span word="concede">concede</span> 有些时候有些人在得到安逸生活以后就不思进取了。<span word="Davy">Davy</span>, 晚年没有什么成就。</p><p> ② 但是追求安逸的生活是科技发展和人类进步的动力。人们追求更多的休闲时间，从而有了更高效的工作。</p>
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