GRE写作提纲举例指导（6）
<p> 2 、<span word="Competition">Competition</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="ultimately">ultimately</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="benefici">benefici</span> <span word="al">al</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="detrimental">detrimental</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="society">society</span>.</p><p> 同意，防止不良竞争</p><p> 1、经济领域，竞争可以提高产品质量，促进创新更好的质量、服务、创新的动力，消费者受益</p><p> 2、政治领域，竞争可以选出最有能力的领导者，人民受益竞争中，领导者承诺福利，个人能力;防止无能政府</p><p> 3、不良竞争对社会带来问题，如压力，不正当竞争，学生成绩竞争;工作岗位竞争;<span word="immoral">immoral</span> 竞争，<span word="slag">slag</span> <span word="off">off</span> <span word="behind">behind</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="back">back</span></p><p> 2<span word="T">T</span> <span word="Competition">Competition</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="ultimately">ultimately</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="beneficial">beneficial</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="detrimental">detrimental</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="society">society</span>.</p><p> 归根结底，竞争对于社会是利多弊少。</p><p> ①使得更有效率。<span word="A">A</span> 同事之间竞争 <span word="B">B</span>优胜劣汰</p><p> ②增加社会福利。如：竞选时，使得民众对于该选谁更清晰。</p><p> ③当竞争失控时，会有问题。如：超出法律和道德的界限</p><p> ④导致社会上人们普遍压力增大</p><p> <span word="Through">Through</span> <span word="competing">competing</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="eligible">eligible</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="produce">produce</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="values">values</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="competent">competent</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="she">she</span>.</p><p> <span word="While">While</span>, <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="competition">competition</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="fraught">fraught</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="adulteration">adulteration</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="illegality">illegality</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="deterioration">deterioration</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="progress">progress</span>. <span word="A">A</span> <span word="case">case</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="related">related</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="market">market</span> <span word="economy">economy</span>.</p>
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