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GRE写作高分需熟练应用连接词

<p>  <span word="GRE">GRE</span>写作考试对考生的逻辑思维能力有很高的要求,想要完成写作部分并获得<span word="GRE">GRE</span>写作高分,大家就需要非常熟练的应用逻辑思维能力,而体现这个能力最简单的办法就是应用连接词。那什么是连接词呢?下面小编就为大家整理了相关的信息,供大家参考。</p><p>  先来看下面这段话:</p><p>  <span word="Panda">Panda</span> <span word="bear">bear</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="docile">docile</span> <span word="lovely">lovely</span> <span word="animal">animal</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="southwest">southwest</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="China">China</span>. <span word="Its">Its</span> <span word="cherubic">cherubic</span> <span word="appearance">appearance</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="awkward">awkward</span> <span word="movement">movement</span> <span word="appeals">appeals</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="adults">adults</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="symbolizes">symbolizes</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="spirit">spirit</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="peace">peace</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="harmony">harmony</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="cherished">cherished</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="people">people</span>. <span word="Expansion">Expansion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="wild">wild</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="caused">caused</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sharp">sharp</span> <span word="decrease">decrease</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="panda">panda</span> <span word="bears">bears</span>.</p><p>  这段话由四句组成,彼此之间存在着明显的联系,论证的都是中国大熊猫的情况。排除语法,文字优美等诸多考虑,这段话给人的感觉是四个孤立的句子,而不是一段文章。</p><p>  其原因之一,是它缺乏必要的过渡,文中主题之间缺乏有机联系导致文章缺乏必要的连贯性。这一问题也是学生在写作实践中普遍存在的现象。</p><p>  在诸多北美考试的写作评分标准中,都出现过与连接和过渡相关的要求,比如</p><p>  <span word="displays">displays</span> <span word="unity">unity</span>, <span word="progression">progression</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="coherence">coherence</span>, <span word="though">though</span> <span word="connection">connection</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="ideas">ideas</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="occasionally">occasionally</span> <span word="obscured">obscured</span></p><p>  <span word="develops">develops</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="organizes">organizes</span> <span word="ideas">ideas</span> <span word="satisfactorily">satisfactorily</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="notconnect">notconnect</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="transitions">transitions</span></p>
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