GRE写作：奖学金申请文章写作范文
<p> <span word="Growing">Growing</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="modest">modest</span> <span word="village">village</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="China">China</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="hardly">hardly</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="chance">chance</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="technology">technology</span>;<span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="dig">dig</span> <span word="wells">wells</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="hand">hand</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="obtain">obtain</span> <span word="drinking">drinking</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="ox">ox</span>-<span word="driven">driven</span> <span word="plows">plows</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="cultivate">cultivate</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="fields">fields</span> <span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="televisions">televisions</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="computers">computers</span>。 <span word="But">But</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="father">father</span> <span word="gave">gave</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="radio">radio</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="play">play</span> <span word="with">with</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="wanted">wanted</span> <span word="nothing">nothing</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="apart">apart</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="contraption">contraption</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="inside">inside</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="interesting">interesting</span> <span word="sounds">sounds</span>。<span word="Sitting">Sitting</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="floor">floor</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="confused">confused</span> <span word="grin">grin</span>，<span word="surrounded">surrounded</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="wires">wires</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="metal">metal</span>， <span word="I">I</span> <span word="looked">looked</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="father">father</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="asked">asked</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="noises">noises</span> <span word="were">were</span>。。。</p><p> 合理地阐述了申请者学习电子工程的动机，学习动机是评审委员非常看中的。同时，读了这段文字，会使读者沉浸在对童年往事的美好回忆里，借此打动评审委员的心。</p><p> 另外一篇修改过的文章开头用诗一般的语言写道：</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="paragraph">paragraph</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Madame">Madame</span> <span word="Curie">Curie</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> 14-<span word="year">year</span>-<span word="old">old</span> <span word="child">child</span>， <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="remember">remember</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="wonderful">wonderful</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="felt">felt</span>。 <span word="I">I</span> <span word="remember">remember</span> <span word="thinking">thinking</span>，<span word="What">What</span> <span word="esteemed">esteemed</span> <span word="men">men</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="were">were</span>!<span word="How">How</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="worked">worked</span>! <span word="As">As</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="grew">grew</span> <span word="older">older</span>，<span word="this">this</span> <span word="paragraph">paragraph</span> <span word="became">became</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="source">source</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="encouragement">encouragement</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="face">face</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="adversity">adversity</span>。<span word="I">I</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="magical">magical</span> <span word="blue">blue</span> <span word="light">light</span> <span word="twinkling">twinkling</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="heart">heart</span>，<span word="kindling">kindling</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="science">science</span>，<span word="and">and</span> <span word="encouraging">encouraging</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="charge">charge</span> <span word="bravely">bravely</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="unknown">unknown</span> <span word="world">world</span>。</p><p> 结尾呼应了开头，阐述了作者为什么要去美国读书：</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="forgot">forgot</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="adolescent">adolescent</span> <span word="idol">idol</span>，<span word="Maria">Maria</span> <span word="Curie">Curie</span>。<span word="As">As</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="re">re</span>-<span word="read">read</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="book">book</span>，<span word="another">another</span> <span word="passage">passage</span> <span word="leaped">leaped</span> <span word="out">out</span>：<span word="She">She</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="now">now</span> 24-<span word="an">an</span> <span word="age">age</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="contemporaries">contemporaries</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="brink">brink</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="discoveries">discoveries</span>。。<span word="Maria">Maria</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="train">train</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Warsaw">Warsaw</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Paris">Paris</span>，<span word="the">the</span> <span word="intellectual">intellectual</span> <span word="Mecca">Mecca</span>。</p>
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