GRE作文点评：看门见山直陈式观点
<p> <span word="Issue">Issue</span> 30</p><p> <span word="Insgroupsto">Insgroupsto</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="instruction">instruction</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="level">level</span>, <span word="all">all</span> <span word="faculty">faculty</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="required">required</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="outside">outside</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="professions">professions</span> <span word="relevant">relevant</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="courses">courses</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="teach">teach</span>.</p><p> <span word="Whether">Whether</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="faculty">faculty</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="outside">outside</span> <span word="academia">academia</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="related">related</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="fields">fields</span>, <span word="depends">depends</span> <span word="primarily">primarily</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="specific">specific</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="area">area</span>.</p><p> 看到了吗？这就是看门见山的直陈式观点了。没有太多的扭扭捏捏，而且也不需要。</p><p> <span word="With">With</span> <span word="respect">respect</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="fields">fields</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="outside">outside</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="appropriate">appropriate</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="strongly">strongly</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="statement">statement</span>; <span word="students">students</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="faculty">faculty</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="stand">stand</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="gain">gain</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="variety">variety</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="respects">respects</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="professor">professor</span> <span word="complements">complements</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="duties">duties</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="real">real</span>-<span word="world">world</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>.</p><p> 这一段要了解的一个词：<span word="stand">stand</span> <span word="to">to</span> = <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="to">to</span>作者在首段就点明了个别问题个别分析对待，但是也不能忽视<span word="practical">practical</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>对<span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="world">world</span>的重要作用。</p><p> <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="threshold">threshold</span> <span word="matter">matter</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="statement">statement</span> <span word="requires">requires</span> <span word="qualification">qualification</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="respects">respects</span>.这一句可作为自己的开头句。<span word="First">First</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="profession">profession</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="speak">speak</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="outside">outside</span> <span word="academia">academia</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="humanities">humanities</span>; <span word="after">after</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="what">what</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="outside">outside</span> <span word="academia">academia</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="professors">professors</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="literature">literature</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="philosophy">philosophy</span>? <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="statement">statement</span> <span word="fails">fails</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="professors">professors</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="duties">duties</span> <span word="typically">typically</span> <span word="involve">involve</span> <span word="practical">practical</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sort">sort</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="occurs">occurs</span> <span word="outside">outside</span> <span word="academia">academia</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fine">fine</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="performing">performing</span> <span word="arts">arts</span>, <span word="where">where</span> <span word="faculty">faculty</span> <span word="actively">actively</span> <span word="engage">engage</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="craft">craft</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="demonstrating">demonstrating</span> <span word="techniques">techniques</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="styles">styles</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="students">students</span>.</p>
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