GRE作文点评：一种值得借鉴的分析法
<p> <span word="Issue">Issue</span> 15</p><p> <span word="Unfortunately">Unfortunately</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="media">media</span> <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="highlight">highlight</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="sensational">sensational</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="moment">moment</span>. <span word="Society">Society</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="served">served</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="media">media</span> <span word="reported">reported</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="focused">focused</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="fully">fully</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="events">events</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="trends">trends</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="ultimately">ultimately</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="long">long</span>-<span word="term">term</span> <span word="significance">significance</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="asserts">asserts</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="merely">merely</span> <span word="highlighting">highlighting</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="sensational">sensational</span> <span word="events">events</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="media">media</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="complete">complete</span> <span word="coverage">coverage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="events">events</span>. <span word="While">While</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speakers">speakers</span> <span word="assertion">assertion</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="merit">merit</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="normative">normative</span> <span word="standpoint">standpoint</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="final">final</span> <span word="analysis">analysis</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="assertion">assertion</span> <span word="indefensible">indefensible</span>.个人认为这一段最后一句可以背掉放入自己建立的句子库内。</p><p> <span word="Upon">Upon</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="impression">impression</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speakers">speakers</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="compelling">compelling</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>. <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="without">without</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="complete">complete</span>, <span word="unfiltered">unfiltered</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="balanced">balanced</span> <span word="account">account</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="current">current</span> <span word="events">events</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="impossible">impossible</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="develop">develop</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="informed">informed</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="intelligent">intelligent</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="political">political</span> <span word="issues">issues</span> <span word="and">and</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="turn">turn</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="contribute">contribute</span> <span word="meaningfully">meaningfully</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="democratic">democratic</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="relies">relies</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="broad">broad</span> <span word="participation">participation</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="ongoing">ongoing</span> <span word="debate">debate</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="issues">issues</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="steer">steer</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="proper">proper</span> <span word="course">course</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="end">end</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="largely">largely</span> <span word="uninformed">uninformed</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="relegate">relegate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="decisions">decisions</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="handful">handful</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="legislators">legislators</span>, <span word="jurists">jurists</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="executives">executives</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="us">us</span>. <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="by">by</span> <span word="focusing">focusing</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sensationalby">sensationalby</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="mean">mean</span> <span word="comparatively">comparatively</span> <span word="shocking">shocking</span>, <span word="entertaining">entertaining</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="titillating">titillating</span> <span word="events">events</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="easily">easily</span> <span word="catch">catch</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="attention">attention</span>-<span word="the">the</span> <span word="media">media</span> <span word="appeal">appeal</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="emotions">emotions</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="baser">baser</span> <span word="instincts">instincts</span>, <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="intellect">intellect</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="reason">reason</span>. <span word="Any">Any</span> <span word="observant">observant</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="list">list</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="aptly">aptly</span> <span word="illustrating">illustrating</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="trend">trend</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="directionfrom">directionfrom</span> <span word="trashy">trashy</span> <span word="talk">talk</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="news">news</span> <span word="broadcasts">broadcasts</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="National">National</span> <span word="Enquixer">Enquixer</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="People">People</span> <span word="Magazine">Magazine</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="trend">trend</span> <span word="dearly">dearly</span> <span word="serves">serves</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="undermine">undermine</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="societys">societys</span> <span word="collective">collective</span> <span word="sensibilities">sensibilities</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="renders">renders</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="societys">societys</span> <span word="members">members</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="vulnerable">vulnerable</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="demagoguery">demagoguery</span>; <span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="abhor">abhor</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="resist">resist</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="trend">trend</span>.</p>
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