GRE写作讲义(五)－习作评改4
<p> 写作词汇</p><p> <span word="Original">Original</span>: <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="era">era</span>, <span word="all">all</span> <span word="kinds">kinds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="messages">messages</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="booming">booming</span> <span word="everyday">everyday</span>.</p><p> <span word="Revised">Revised</span>: <span word="In">In</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="times">times</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="exposed">exposed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="deal">deal</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="information">information</span>.</p><p> <span word="Original">Original</span>: <span word="Maybe">Maybe</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="urgent">urgent</span> <span word="conditions">conditions</span>, <span word="political">political</span> <span word="leaders">leaders</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="withhold">withhold</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="avoid">avoid</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="turbulence">turbulence</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span>, <span word="even">even</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="desirable">desirable</span>.</p><p> <span word="Revised">Revised</span>: <span word="Political">Political</span> <span word="leaders">leaders</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="sometimes">sometimes</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="withhold">withhold</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="avoid">avoid</span> <span word="potential">potential</span> <span word="conflict">conflict</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span>, <span word="let">let</span> <span word="alone">alone</span> <span word="desirable">desirable</span>.</p><p> <span word="Original">Original</span>: <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="era">era</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="democracy">democracy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="law">law</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="complete">complete</span>, <span word="everyone">everyone</span> <span word="realizes">realizes</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="rights">rights</span> <span word="including">including</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="interested">interested</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="relative">relative</span> <span word="to">to</span>.</p><p> <span word="Revised">Revised</span>: <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="era">era</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="democracy">democracy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="established">established</span> <span word="codes">codes</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="law">law</span>, <span word="everyone">everyone</span> <span word="knows">knows</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="rights">rights</span>, <span word="particularly">particularly</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="subject">subject</span> <span word="bears">bears</span> <span word="immediate">immediate</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="them">them</span>.</p><p> <span word="Original">Original</span>: <span word="People">People</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="away">away</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="New">New</span> <span word="York">York</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="heard">heard</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="disaster">disaster</span> <span word="happening">happening</span> <span word="there">there</span>.</p><p> <span word="Revised">Revised</span>: <span word="Or">Or</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="blind">blind</span> <span word="eye">eye</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="momentous">momentous</span> <span word="events">events</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="September">September</span> 11<span word="th">th</span> <span word="attacks">attacks</span>, <span word="just">just</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="happened">happened</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="away">away</span>.</p><p> <span word="Original">Original</span>: <span word="Even">Even</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="withhold">withhold</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="information">information</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="absence">absence</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="surely">surely</span> <span word="hurt">hurt</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="people">people</span>, <span word="further">further</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="sooner">sooner</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="later">later</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="close">close</span> <span word="relation">relation</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="those">those</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="affect">affect</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="last">last</span>.</p>
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