GRE6分作文点评：对题材的深刻理解
<p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unfortunate">unfortunate</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="todays">todays</span> <span word="educators">educators</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="emphasis">emphasis</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="finding">finding</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="include">include</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="curriculum">curriculum</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="giving">giving</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="educators">educators</span> <span word="duty">duty</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="determine">determine</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="curriculum">curriculum</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="duty">duty</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="presented">presented</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="them">them</span>.</p><p> 题目的意思是，当今教育部门过于重视学生在课程设置中的决定作用，正确的做法是教育部门决定课程，学生的任务就是好好学习。</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="statement">statement</span> <span word="above">above</span> <span word="conceals">conceals</span> <span word="intesting">intesting</span> <span word="connotations">connotations</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="above">above</span> <span word="curriculum">curriculum</span> <span word="development">development</span>. <span word="Issues">Issues</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="classroom">classroom</span> <span word="control">control</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="scholarly">scholarly</span> <span word="talents">talents</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="stake">stake</span>, <span word="not">not</span> <span word="simply">simply</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="debate">debate</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="books">books</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="acceptable">acceptable</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="revisionist">revisionist</span> <span word="histories">histories</span>.</p><p> 开题表明课程设置是次要的，重要的是适当的课堂秩序以及培养学生的学术才能。这是一个典型的另起炉灶型的作文，提出<span word="issue">issue</span>题目中并不包含的观点。</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="statement">statement</span> <span word="itself">itself</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bit">bit</span> <span word="misleading">misleading</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>, <span word="student">student</span> <span word="control">control</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="curriculum">curriculum</span> <span word="hardly">hardly</span> <span word="existed">existed</span>. <span word="Each">Each</span> <span word="year">year</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="course">course</span> <span word="offerings">offerings</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="available">available</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="choose">choose</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="offerings">offerings</span>, <span word="of">of</span> <span word="course">course</span> <span word="bearing">bearing</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="mind">mind</span> <span word="requirements">requirements</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="graduation">graduation</span> <span word="set">set</span> <span word="forth">forth</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="administration">administration</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="classroom">classroom</span> <span word="level">level</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="immediate">immediate</span>, <span word="initial">initial</span> <span word="material">material</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="somewhat">somewhat</span> <span word="directed">directed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="process">process</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span>/<span word="professor">professor</span> <span word="insgroupsto">insgroupsto</span> <span word="gain">gain</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span>.</p>
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