GRE写作argument全部官方范文分析(8)
<p> 第六篇文章</p><p> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="dental">dental</span> <span word="patients">patients</span> <span word="showed">showed</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="Smile">Smile</span>-<span word="Bright">Bright</span> <span word="toothpaste">toothpaste</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="capped">capped</span> <span word="teeth">teeth</span> -- <span word="artificial">artificial</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="natural">natural</span>-<span word="looking">looking</span> <span word="protective">protective</span> <span word="coverings">coverings</span> <span word="placed">placed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="dentists">dentists</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="teeth">teeth</span>.</p><p> <span word="Those">Those</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="begun">begun</span> <span word="using">using</span> <span word="Smile">Smile</span>-<span word="Bright">Bright</span> <span word="toothpaste">toothpaste</span> <span word="early">early</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="capped">capped</span> <span word="teeth">teeth</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="begun">begun</span> <span word="using">using</span> <span word="Smile">Smile</span>-<span word="Bright">Bright</span> <span word="later">later</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="life">life</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="reported">reported</span> <span word="brushing">brushing</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="teeth">teeth</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="twice">twice</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="Smile">Smile</span>-<span word="Bright">Bright</span> <span word="toothpaste">toothpaste</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="caps">caps</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="teeth">teeth</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="reported">reported</span> <span word="brushing">brushing</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="Smile">Smile</span>-<span word="Bright">Bright</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="frequently">frequently</span>.</p><p> <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="people">people</span> <span word="wishing">wishing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="avoid">avoid</span> <span word="having">having</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="teeth">teeth</span> <span word="capped">capped</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="Smile">Smile</span>-<span word="Bright">Bright</span> <span word="toothpaste">toothpaste</span>.</p><p> 原文逻辑顺序：用<span word="SB">SB</span>的最易带牙套==〉早用比晚用<span word="SB">SB</span>的易带牙套，每天用两次<span word="SB">SB</span>的更易带牙套==〉想不带牙套就不用<span word="SB">SB</span>。</p><p> 注：这篇文章大家一看肯定特别有亲切感，因为这和摸版和北美范文摸版非常的像!甚至，我怀疑，这就是后两者的原型。这些研究考试的人发现这篇文章具有很好的操作性，并看上去结构特别清晰。所以也就照葫芦画瓢。如果是这样的话，研究这个原版的价值就不言而喻了。</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="contains">contains</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="facets">facets</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="questionable">questionable</span>. 段首句指出存在问题，同样没有过多的修饰，简洁明快。使文章迅速转移到后面的实质性分析。 <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reliability">reliability</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="generalizability">generalizability</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="open">open</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="quesiton">quesiton</span>. 指出第一个问题是调查类问题，并具体说出了是样本可信度和样本代表性，实际上这和后面的论证是对应的。 <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="correlation">correlation</span> <span word="amounts">amounts</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="causal">causal</span> <span word="relationship">relationship</span>. 指出第二个问题，是因果关系。 <span word="The">The</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="fails">fails</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="examine">examine</span> <span word="alternative">alternative</span> <span word="explanations">explanations</span>. 指出第三个问题，没有提出上面因果关系的他因。 <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="discuss">discuss</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="facets">facets</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="turn">turn</span>.第一段简洁明了，三个攻击点统领下面三段。这里对原文的复述似乎并不详细。因为原文的逻辑链很简单，作者不用向我们证明他读懂了，我们也知道他肯定读懂了。不像第五个范文那样，读个原题就得半天。实际上，这里的重点放在了后面的分析上，同时在后面的分析中也包含了复述原题中的每一个条件。</p>
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