GRE写作argument全部官方范文分析(7)
<p> 第五篇文章</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="editor">editor</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span>.</p><p> <span word="Five">Five</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="ago">ago</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="residents">residents</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Morganton">Morganton</span> <span word="voted">voted</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="publicly">publicly</span> <span word="owned">owned</span> <span word="piece">piece</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="land">land</span> <span word="known">known</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="Scott">Scott</span> <span word="Woods">Woods</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="natural">natural</span>, <span word="undeveloped">undeveloped</span> <span word="state">state</span>.</p><p> <span word="Our">Our</span> <span word="thinking">thinking</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="that">that</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="shopping">shopping</span> <span word="centers">centers</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="houses">houses</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="built">built</span> <span word="there">there</span>, <span word="Scott">Scott</span> <span word="Woods">Woods</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="continue">continue</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="community">community</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="natural">natural</span> <span word="parkland">parkland</span>.</p><p> <span word="But">But</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="town">town</span> <span word="planning">planning</span> <span word="committee">committee</span> <span word="wants">wants</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="purchase">purchase</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="land">land</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="build">build</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="there">there</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="reconsider">reconsider</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>.</p><p> <span word="If">If</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="land">land</span> <span word="becomes">becomes</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="site">site</span>, <span word="no">no</span> <span word="shopping">shopping</span> <span word="centers">centers</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="houses">houses</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="built">built</span> <span word="there">there</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="substantial">substantial</span> <span word="acreage">acreage</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="probably">probably</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="devoted">devoted</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="athletic">athletic</span> <span word="fields">fields</span>.</p><p> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="land">land</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="community">community</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="this">this</span>, <span word="since">since</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="majority">majority</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="participate">participate</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="sports">sports</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Scott">Scott</span> <span word="Woods">Woods</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="continue">continue</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="community">community</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="natural">natural</span> <span word="parkland">parkland</span>.</p><p> 原文逻辑顺序：五年前投票决定某地保持原生态==〉原生态可用来做公园让大家受益==〉现在有人建议盖学校==〉盖学校就要改此地为操场==〉建操场是唯一能此地还保持原生态的方案</p><p> <span word="This">This</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="editor">editor</span> <span word="begins">begins</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="stating">stating</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="residents">residents</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Morganton">Morganton</span> <span word="voted">voted</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="Scott">Scott</span> <span word="Woods">Woods</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="undeveloped">undeveloped</span> <span word="state">state</span>.<span word="The">The</span> <span word="letter">letter</span> <span word="states">states</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="entire">entire</span> <span word="community">community</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="undeveloped">undeveloped</span> <span word="parkland">parkland</span>.<span word="The">The</span> <span word="residents">residents</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="town">town</span> <span word="wanted">wanted</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="ensure">ensure</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="shopping">shopping</span> <span word="centers">centers</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="houses">houses</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="built">built</span> <span word="there">there</span>.<span word="This">This</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="turn">turn</span>, <span word="would">would</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="everyone">everyone</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="community">community</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="valuable">valuable</span> <span word="resource">resource</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="natural">natural</span> <span word="park">park</span>.这里是复述题目的前半部分，即五年前人们的看法以及理由。基本上没有加入任何分析。</p>
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